Girl, I am so impressed with each chapter I read. I can't wait for more. You're writing is reminiscent of a few of the greats from the "glory days"...which is what initially invited me into the world of fanfic. I get lost with each paragraph I read, seriously. You're so inside his head and the words are so vivid. I felt like I was right along side him as he went through the motions. Very curious as to what you have in store. Good fucking work, woman!

Author's Response: Okay, wow. Wow lol. Thank you! I remember the "glory days" and miss them when I look for fanfic to read, so the fact you're saying my writing is like that is a huge compliment for me. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I wonder what's up with Nick? I like this even more now, can't wait for another chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks MA! :)

I love the fact that more of Kevin is rising up outta Brian; they aren't Kentucky cousins for nothing! Which brings me to this... Kevin needs to come back to get and keep ALL their asses on track! Lol. Again, I could visually picture Nick in that motel, everything from waking up next to the nude fan, to splashing his face with water, to escaping the room. Great job, as always, and with the way you're on a roll with all these updates, I'll gladly be your cheerleader anyday! :D

Author's Response: LOL you gotta figure Kevin rubbed off on Brian a tad. I mean they are cousins...he's known Kevin all his life! ;-). Thanks for the compliments and encouragement. But don't get used to this, my muse is NOT usually this active lmao. I have no idea how long she'll keep this pace up LOL.

Can't wait to see where this is headed...it sounds like he's annoyed at Brian for some reason.

Author's Response: Thanks! Well, it's Nick, and Brian's being protective. Nick never takes that sort of thing well LOL.

Ooh, I like this so far. It's pretty good for Nick story, hehe. :)

Author's Response: I'm impressed I got you reading a Nick story! lol. No worries, it's not like AJ doesn't exist, he shall make many appearances hehe. Thanks! I'm glad you like it.

I love how this chapter made me smile, yet brought me back to the dark core of this story. I chuckled upon Nick remembering what AJ had taught him about groupies wanting a second night. That is sooo AJ, and thought it was cute that the baby brother had remembered what his oldest nympho brother taught him, lmao. I smiled at the first interaction with Brian and Nick, with the whole nicknames and Brian asking Nick to join him for basketball. Then it became somber when Nick realized what his best friend was actually trying to do. Curse Nick for being sooo damn stubborn! Lol. And, of course, he would go out and try to prove a point. That damn kid! Lol. But on the real, I seriously loved the balance in this first chapter and how you're steadily building everything up; you're preparing to take us deeper into Nick's psyche, and I freaking love it! Can't wait for the next update! :)

Author's Response: Awww well thank you. Of course AJ would have taught Nick half the sex rules he knows lmfao. And Brian and Nick...they have such a loving relationship, even though sometimes Brian oversteps and Nick realizes it and gets all grr about it. And Nick wouldn't be Nick without being stubborn right? lol. But wow thank you so much Reb, I love all the compliments!

OK...I was all cool until I got to the end and saw his signature then the tears tried to surface. It's always the little things, right? lol Anyway, such a beautiful and poignant beginning to what I imagine the following story will be as well. Can't wait to read more, girl. :)

Author's Response: It's always the little things, thats why I try so hard to include them lol. Thanks so much Kel, I'm thrilled you decided to check out one of my fics :)