Date: 07/28/10 05:20 am Title: Chapter 7
With each dream, a little more is revealed making this mystery so very tantalizing for me. For Nick....not so much. I loved the dream sequence where Nick is, figuratively, two people... Andrew and Nick. Mare, I am always impressed with your characterizations; they always pull the reader into the story. I am anxiously awaiting the next installment.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Pammy! :O) I hope I won't disappoint you! By the way i'm updating Scars tomorrow! LOL
Date: 07/26/10 11:43 am Title: Chapter 7
Thanks for the update. Love the Kevin in this story & how he fathers Nick....he`s always fun to write, isn`t he? Left me hanging again....good work can`t wait for the next chapter PLEASE HURRY!!! :)
Author's Response:
I love writing Kevin and miss him. That's why I think from now on if I contiue on this writing thing, i'm only doing back in the day fics. Thanks for reading and the review Jenna!
Date: 07/26/10 11:14 am Title: Chapter 7
I was sat on the edge of my seat for the whole chapter, wondering what was going to happen in the dream and who those people are.
I hope his Dad has some answers for him, that's if he gets there!
Author's Response:
Aww thanks Steph! We'll find out on Friday what happens with dad! :O) Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/26/10 07:30 am Title: Chapter 7
WOW! Omg that was scary! I loved the sleepover comment and painting each others nails lmao. I loved the "Darth" joke as well, and Kevin saying he had to pee. But what scared me was the dream. I am guessing Nick witnessed something that he shouldn't have, and now his mind has returned to it. Can't wait to find out more, I love this story so far! Very intriguing!
Author's Response:
Thanks! LOL at the thought of the guys painting each other's nails. I'd like to be a fly on the wall if that ever happens.
Date: 07/26/10 05:04 am Title: Chapter 7
Poor Nick. What a freaky dream! And now he's sleepwalking? Damn. I hope he gets the answers he needs soon. And can't wait to see what you "might" post on Wednesday :) !
Author's Response:
Thanks Sel! And I think you'll be happy on Wednesday! :O) It's because of you that I even re-opened it!
Date: 07/26/10 02:10 am Title: Chapter 7
Ahhh, I'm dying for answers! This dream was creepy too, especially with him waking up under the sink and not remembering supposedly pacing around all night. I loved the dialogue with Kevin before that - I laughed out loud at him asking Nick if he was gonna crawl into bed with him and calling him Darth for breathing loud LOL. I love this story; can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks Julie! LOL I glad you enjoyed the Darth comment and the whole bed thing. Can you imagine waking up under a sink? Eww!
Date: 07/26/10 01:01 am Title: Chapter 7
Wow....and here I was all excited hoping Bob would've arrived already LOL :P. Still I love it. The dreams, Nick being called Andrew... something definitely isn't right. Can't wait to see your next chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thanks Rose! Yeah, i'm hoping I didn't annoy too many people since I have only gotten two reviews. LOL Normally everyone responds pretty quickly so i'm all paranoid that everyone thought this chapter sucked. And duh! You think i'm going to let everyone know everything this early on? :OP one more chapter! hehe
