Date: 06/04/17 08:29 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh My Lord, I love my Kevin
Date: 01/26/12 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 8
I knew something would happen to his dad, you wouldn't make it that easy. but he called and gave information? what the heck is going on?
Author's Response:
No way lol Why would I make something easy?
Date: 08/02/10 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 8
"You guys didn't actually think i'd make it that easy to find out what's happening did you?" I was hoping! :-0 Now, what has happened to Bob? And who is the man "following" Nick? Curiouser and curiouser.
“He’s not alone.” Kevin said as he walked around the corner. “He’s with me.” This was my favorite part! I love me some protective Kevin!
Once again, great installment, Mare. I'm looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response:
Thanks Pam! lol that was actually my favorite part of the entire chapter as well. *sighs* I miss having protective Kevin around all the time.
Date: 08/01/10 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
Yay! I heart uber-protective Kevin. lol It's nice to see that Nick is no longer the only one trippin' about all this stuff anymore, that the other guys are starting to see it too. Can't wait to find out who this creeper is too.
Author's Response:
Uber-protective Kevin rocks! lol I think we all need one of those! Thanks Sam! :O)
Date: 07/31/10 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
I had a feeling Nick's Dad wasn't going to arrive! But I wonder what's happened to him?
As for the creepy guy, when he was stood outside the toilet cubicle I was starting to really worry, but thank god someone came in and created an escape for him!
Can't wait for more, you have me completely hooked and wondering what's going to happen next!
Author's Response:
Thanks Steph! I knew you kind of figured out he wasn't going to be there just by the last review you had left for me. I'm so happy to hear you're hooked! :O)
Date: 07/31/10 02:54 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh wow. If I were Nick I'd be feeling sick to my stomach at this point. Pretty sure my stomach wanted to make a break for it in Nick's honor. I loved it :)
Author's Response:
I know! I would too. Thanks Rose :O)
Date: 07/31/10 01:49 am Title: Chapter 8
OMG Mare! I felt so sad for Nick in this chapter! :( What happened to his dad?? I should have known you wouldn't make it that easy... I figured we wouldn't really learn much in this chapter, but I didn't expect his dad not to even show. And the freaky guy with the pointy shoes... creepy!! I'm glad Kevin and Howie saw him so at least they know Nick isn't crazy. I was afraid Nick was gonna get abducted from the bathroom there for awhile. Wonder what's going to happen now? I love this story, so suspenseful!! I can never predict where your stories are going, and I love that about them!
Author's Response:
Thanks Julie! Yeah, I was hoping that even though everyone knew I wouldn't actually tell them what was going to happen, they still wouldn't see dad just not showing up. Thanks again! :O)
Date: 07/30/10 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 8
Eekkkkk this is scaring me! That hit was definitely following him and Nick has every right to be freaked out. I wonder what happened to his dad though, that was weird! Poor Nick. UPDATE
Author's Response:
Aww thanks for the feedback! :O)