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Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/10 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 13

Finally catching up; sorry I fell so behind! It was nice that they got a chance to talk to creepy guy, but as usual, Max left me with more questions than answers LOL. Glad I have two more chapters to read!

Author's Response: Aw, that's okay. I know you're busy lol

Reviewer: nicola929 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/10 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 13

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks! It's going to be posted later on tonight :O)

Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 05:11 am Title: Chapter 13

can't wait to read more, I hope they find Bob.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :O)

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 13

Ok...the part about Kevin holding the bible as a weapon was so funny. Bob is obviously in some type of shady business...very interested to find out more. That whole visit was just weird. I'd be freaking out too. I also liked the part where Nick is guessing that AJ would be an alcoholic. Cool way to fit that in. Thanks for another chap! :)

Author's Response: Thanks Sel. Yeah, not sure why I made him grab a bible but I went with it lol thanks for the AJ mention as well. I thought I would throw that in there for good measure. :O)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 08:58 am Title: Chapter 13

Well, I didn't expect that! I thought Max was going to hold them at gun point or something. But he's there to watch out for them instead, hmm, I wonder who else is involved and what Jane has to do with it all.

Loved the antler present for AJ though :) Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks Steph. Yup, Max is there to help. :O) Things will all start falling into place slowly. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 04:43 am Title: Chapter 13

You should be earlier on that update! I'm confused but I know I'm supposed to be LOL, like Nick is :P. That Max guy is...well weird. You can tell Bob's totally involved in something shady, you just can't guess what it is. Loved it!

Author's Response: YAY I'm just happy someone reviewed. Thanks Rose, I was starting to get a really big complex. Yup, the whole purpose is to be confused as poor Nick is. lol