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Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/12 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 19

Oh he's going to sneak into Max's room to try to get some answers. Wow what a vivid scene you painted with the fire and lil Andrew trying to get away from the man with the accent.



Author's Response:

Wow, it's always nice to come home and see a ton of reviews in my box! Thanks for the compliment. I'm glad it was nice and vivid! :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/10 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 19

Great chapter! I wonder if he'll find what he wants in Max's room, or will someone catch him in there? Hmm, we'll see.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading Steph! :O)

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/10 08:07 am Title: Chapter 19

Another great chap, Mare. Love the way you did the flashbacks this time around :) It was different to have him awake but in a trance. I'm so glad that the guys are so supportive and caring.

And poor Nick :( He's so confused about his past and now this happens to his house. I have to say that I thought something happened to Kevin's family.

Author's Response: Thanks Sel! Aww, nope they are okay...for now *insert sinister dun dun dun* lol Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/10 04:16 am Title: Chapter 19

Awwww poor nicky. Losing your home is not fun at all. He must be feeling so scared. The dreams are getting crazy! Glad the boys are so understanding. I hope Nick doesn't get himself into trouble going to max's room! Great chapter as always!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! It's Nick! You know trouble will find him wherever he goes! lol

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/10 03:32 am Title: Chapter 19

I have no words this time. At least nothing helpful. I'm worried for the Boys, if they burned down Nick's home... it won't be long before they track them down.

I also loved the way you addressed the flashback, not cheesy, but in actual flashes. I could totally picture it and it reminded me of how they do it in TV shows.

Loved it. :)

Author's Response: aww thanks Rose! YAY i'm glad you liked the flashbacks. I'm always worried they will come off to cheesy or cliched but I was going to the tv flashback thing, so i'm happy it came across that way.

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/10 03:18 am Title: Chapter 19

Aw, poor Nicky! Glad we're getting more of the story about the fire. And glad Bob's not dead - that we know of. Can't wait to see what they find out next! Great update!

Author's Response: Wow, you were fast! lol Yup, slowly we'll start finding things out now. :O) thanks for reading!