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Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/12 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 32

I hope Nick really has improved his acting from that library video! LOL. 



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lmao true true 

Reviewer: mersey Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/11 03:39 am Title: Chapter 32

it pains me but i have a feeling Nickolas will not survive this. and i forgot to mention how i love the fact that Nick referred to both Kevin and Nickolas as his 'two older brothers' last chap.

also, little brother!!!

*hopes Nickolas survives this*



Author's Response:

aww having a feeling of forboding are we? :OP lol

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/11 07:33 am Title: Chapter 32

Okay, I love that you mentioned the library video LMAO. That's just awesome. Not Nick's best showing of acting haha.

Awesome chapter, not sure myself if Nick can pull it off. Love him and all, but yeah, acting's not his thing.

I don't blame him for feeling weird about everything with Jane. How could he not? He thought she was dead for so long and really she's just been hidden.

Author's Response: Gotta give love to the Library video and Nick's acting skills. Poor guy. lol Yeah, considering all the crap going on with Jane, he's taking it quite well. Thanks for reading Rose! :O)

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/11 03:17 am Title: Chapter 32

LMFAO thank you for the L-I-B-R-A-R-Y video reference; that made me giggle! So did "Wow, once again you have to re-examine your life when you can use a sentence like that as a starting point of a conversation." and "I saluted him, not sure why. Maybe because I’m a major in the Army of Dork!" LOL Good comic relief in this chapter. Much needed, cause otherwise it was pretty sad, with the whole flashback of Nick being locked in the freezer, and suspenseful, all the build-up of going back to Max. Can't wait to see what's gonna happen next!

Author's Response: I knew you'd get a kick out of the library reference lol and yay for you mentioning what were my favorite lines in there as well. Thanks for reading and Happy New Year!

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/10 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 32

Oooh I'm very interested in this plan of theirs. It will be very interesting to see how Nick can get Max to believe him. I liked the scene at the end with Nick and his mom, it seemed very eerie, but sweet at the same time. Great chapter, Mare :)

Author's Response: Thanks Steph and Happy New Year! :O)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/10 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 32

Happy New Year to you too!

Great chapter, I thought Nick's reaction to his mum was great, he would be a bit wary at first but then want her attention. Roger sounds like a right nasty bastard! I like the line "major in the army of dork". Looking forward to more but also sad that it's coming to an end. Wonder who'll get out of it all alive?

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that line! I actually laughed when i wrote it. Yeah I think he would be really weary of her and not want to get too close. They have a lot of catching up to do. Thanks for reading Steph! :O)

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/10 06:50 am Title: Chapter 32

Good stuff! I love how childish Nick is about everything...even crossing his fingers behind his back when lying! LOL. Can't wait to see how this plan will work out. And I'm sad to see this story coming to an end :(

Author's Response: Thanks Sel. Yea,I wanted to show that he really is just a kid when it's all said and done. I sometimes even forget how young he is in this story so every so often it's nice to go back and remind everyone lol Happy New Year!

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/10 06:21 am Title: Chapter 32

Yay, another chapter! I hope this plan work, can't wait to see what happens. And I'm glad that Nick is finally talking with his mother. I hope you have a Happy New Year <3



Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I hope this plam works too! Happy New Year!! :O)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/10 06:18 am Title: Chapter 32

As sad as I am that this is coming to an end, I really am enjoying it. This has got to be my favorite story I have read by you. I can't wait until the guys are reunited...I love Kevin saying worrying is his thing. Kevin makes me all warm and fuzzy lol. Great chapter as always!

Author's Response: Thanks Tracy! I enjoy making Kevin warm and fuzzy because I know for a lot of people he doens't come off that way lol I'm so happy to know this is your favorite one of mine. That makes me warm and fuzzy! Happy New Year! :O)

Reviewer: backstreetsbabyg Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/10 06:15 am Title: Chapter 32

wow...
i hope everything works out... and thus the plot continues..

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm hoping it will too! lol