Date: 03/08/12 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 33
oh damn Roger is in the house!!!! look out for freezers! what a dick I hope he dies a terrible horrible death!
Date: 03/08/12 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 32
I hope Nick really has improved his acting from that library video! LOL.
Author's Response:
lmao true true
Date: 03/08/12 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 31
oh since you said you don't kill Kevin (I have a hard time with that too) Nick is gonna lose his brother or his father! Yikes! crazy how your brain works
Author's Response:
One of my rules is no killing Amy of the boys unless it's my very last fanfic. Then all bets are off! lol ;)
Date: 03/08/12 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 30
*sigh* wow! so in a way Max was his uncle, because he kidnapped him and took him to his sister to replace the baby she lost when she had been captured! And Roger was the monster that Nick remembers being shut in the bathroom to protect him from. Interesting, interesting. So Max is trying to get at Jane for revenge for his sister's death and was going to use Nick to get to her... at least that's what I am thinking, onward.
Author's Response:
Something like that :)
Date: 03/08/12 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 29
sooo about the "real mother" then? who is she ... can't wait to find out.
Date: 03/08/12 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 28
oooh interesting Jane killed his real mom for what purpose. Was his real mom really a double agent or something for another country? what is going on? hrm interesting. And now the boys are in trouble, you should have taken them with you Nickolas! grr.
Author's Response:
Yes, maybe not the smartest move Nickolas!
Date: 03/08/12 12:57 am Title: Chapter 27
oh oh oh oh oh oh oh wow! I wish I was at work for another few hours so I could finish this but but .. I never manage to read at home but I'm anxious to know where you are leading us so maybe I'll manage tonight or I will finish tommorrow... eeek.
Author's Response:
Thanks do much for reading this. Glad it's keeping you interested. I'm looking forward to hearing what you think! :) thanks, Lore!
Date: 03/08/12 12:50 am Title: Chapter 26
what the heck is Nickolas doing? who is good and who is not? you have me guessing Mare and that is saying a lot I typically figure things out in stories
Author's Response:
Yay! Glad you haven't figured it all out!
Date: 03/08/12 12:42 am Title: Chapter 25
oh dear lord what is going to happen now, Max is coming in as they are trying to leave!!! eeeeek. has anyone ever told you that you are good at thsi suspense stuff.. lol ;p
Author's Response:
Aww lol well I have heard that a time or two. It's always nice to hear again though lol
Date: 03/08/12 12:27 am Title: Chapter 24
oooh I was starting to think Max wasn't really who he said he was after having the picture. Maybe Nick's mind is making him think that Max was who saved him and the Russian was who was hurting his mother and it was the other way around? hrm interesting, I can't wait to see what other twists and turns you have written into this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I love to put tons of twists into stories. Sometimes they work and sometimes they don't lol
Date: 03/08/12 12:15 am Title: Chapter 23
was that a trap? was it set to make him go look for Kevin in the dumpster and then someone grabe him? was it really Kevin in the dumpster, or is Kevin somehow involved? so many questions, must continue.
Author's Response:
lol
Date: 03/08/12 12:04 am Title: Chapter 22
oh noooos not Kevin!!! :( I hope he's not in that closest like you are leading the reader to believe.
Well you already know the answer to that one. I'd never kill my Kevin! :)
Author's Response:
Date: 03/07/12 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 21
oh no where's Kevin? what did you do to him Mare!!!! lol.
Author's Response:
Hehe ;)
Date: 03/07/12 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 20
I wonder if Kevin figured out what was going on and is trying to get in the room? hrm, maybe Max is back early. Interesting so Jane is alive, does she have something to do with what is going on or did she go into "hiding" after she decided to divorce "Bob"? or something like that... interesting. Continuing on.
Author's Response:
I love all the guessing. It always makes me smile. I do the same thing when I read or watch anything lol
Date: 03/07/12 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 19
Oh he's going to sneak into Max's room to try to get some answers. Wow what a vivid scene you painted with the fire and lil Andrew trying to get away from the man with the accent.
Author's Response:
Wow, it's always nice to come home and see a ton of reviews in my box! Thanks for the compliment. I'm glad it was nice and vivid! :)