Date: 02/22/11 03:29 am Title: Chapter 39
So sad that Nickolas died :( Too bad he and Nick were never able to have much of a relationship. I'm happy that Max was a good guy after all! And that is going to be rough for Nick, having to say goodbye to all the guys. Another great chapter, Mare. And of course you had to end it on a cliffy! I guess that's the benefit to reading them all at once, I don't have to wait! lol
Author's Response:
Well, as you can see his death was greatly exaggerated lol and yay t Max being a good guy. Yup, I caught a lot of hell for leaving it the way I did lol
Date: 02/22/11 03:22 am Title: Chapter 38
That was a very action packed chapter! Kevin is my new hero lol. I liked the mix between action and Nick's goofy comments. You made it all blend together really well! Great chapter, on to the next one :)
Author's Response:
I love Kevin when he tries to be a hero and of course we need goofy Nick comments! Thanks Steph!
Date: 02/17/11 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 40
Wow Mare, I have enjoyed reading this story so much and am kind of gutted that it had to end, but I suppose all good things must come to an end some time.
I loved how he met the guy with the pointy shoes in the toilets and the bodyguard with the Russian accent called Andrew, it gets you thinking!
Well done on a fab story and I'm already loving the new one :)
Author's Response:
Thanks Steph! I'm sop glad you enjoyed this one! hope you enjoy the other one as much! :O) Thanks for sticking with it til the end!
Date: 02/17/11 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 39
So Max was a good guy after all! I loved the way he got Nick's attention and between them, put an end to Roger.
Author's Response:
Yup, poor Max! So many people hated him, but he was a good guy all along. LOL
Date: 02/14/11 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 40
Wow, this ending was genius Mare! I agree with Julie (I think it was her) who said it came full circle. I love that Max is still there with pointy shoes and that Nicholas is a "bodyguard". Even better is that Nick, once again, doesn't remember anything. I loved this story. Loved the suspense and of course, you ending by leaving it open. Haha
Author's Response:
Thanks again Sel! Glad you enjoyed it, I also enjoyed your feedback throughout! :O)
Date: 02/14/11 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 40
Great chapter and awesome story Mare! I actually like the open ending! :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading :O)
Date: 02/13/11 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 40
Aw, poor little memory-loss Nick. lol I liked the ending, especially with all of them still hanging around in some form or another, but Nick not aware of any of it. I liked the little run-in with who I'm guessing is Max, he's still being watched, it makes me like Max again. lol Thanks Mare, glad you're back in full force!
Author's Response:
Thnaks for reading Sam! Yup, that was Max and glad you ended up liking him again. He's a good guy, just misunderstood. :O)
Date: 02/13/11 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 40
Mare, I'm sorry for my lack of feedback on this story; but, I really did enjoy it. I like the ending....it's like it came full circle with Nick regaining memories and eventually losing them. Having "Andrew" a part of the bands detail was ingenious. I loved all the twists and turns in the story and not knowing who to trust. It's everything I like in a suspense story. Again, great job Mare....but, then again, I expect nothing less from you.
Pammy Whammy
Author's Response:
Thanks Pam! I'm so glad to see that you read this one. I'm also happy to know that overall everyone who has reviwed has enjoyed the ending.
Date: 02/13/11 05:45 am Title: Chapter 40
What a nice ending! So he lost his memory, I thing that's a good thing for him. Good because he can't remember all the bad things that happened. I just LOVED this story. You amazed me! When I was reading your chapters I was baiting my nails all the time, lol. And you just know how to end chapters in suspense, lol. I'm so hoping read another story of yours! LOVED THIS!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading! I appreciated all the feedback throughout the entire story! :O)
Date: 02/13/11 05:42 am Title: Chapter 40
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww its over!!!!!!! Sorry. The part about AJ being hit with a board cracked me up. Having Nick getting memory loss was a great way to tie things up...I am very satisfied with the ending. I am also looking forward to what you do next, you're one of my favorite authors ever! Awesome job!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tracy! That's an awesome compliment. :O) I hope I don't disappoint.
Date: 02/13/11 05:31 am Title: Chapter 40
WOW!! I LOVED the way you ended the story!! So clever! You really brought it full circle. We're back to Nick not remembering what he's blocked out, thinking his mom and now his dad are dead even though they're just in hiding, not knowing Nickolas or Max. I loved that Nickolas is alive and calling himself Andrew and posing as their bodyguard. I love that Max is still following Nick around to make sure he's safe. The scene in the bathroom that was so like the one in the airport made me smile (and then search back through the story to find the original scene LOL). And the blueberry pig! Love!! This is the kind of story I feel like I need to reread at some point to get it all straight again; I think it will be even better on the reread, that I'll pick up things I missed the first time around. I love complex plots like that. This one was an amazing ride, with all its twists and turns. You did an awesome job of keeping me guessing! I'm so glad you're back writing fanfic; I bet it feels great to finish this one so quickly! Can't wait to see what your next one will be like! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks Julie! I knew I wanted to recreate that bathroom scene and had to go back and reread it myself a few times before writing it out. lol I really enjoyed writing this one but sometimes the complex plot. The new one is pretty complex too lol I'm glad you liked the full circle and the ending as well. I liked the idea of ending with Nick feeling as insecure as he did when it first started. Thanks for reading it! :O)
Date: 02/13/11 05:26 am Title: Chapter 40
Wow. I actually love this ending. It really suits the type of story it is. Not everything in life is settled and worked out, and not every ending is a happy one. I love that Nick remembers nothing about any of it, but all the guys do. One day he'll work it out, but hopefully if that happens it won't endanger him so much next time. I also love that Nickolas returns as Andrew, it's very much coming around full circle. It's also a sign his family didn't just more or less leave him, they made sure someone was there looking out for him. And having Andrew as his name is sweet, to me anyway lol.
That said...BLUEBERRY PIG! hehe. Loved the story Mare! I always excited to see updates from you. Can't wait for your next one! (Post it tonight :P)
Author's Response:
Thanks Rose, glad you liked how it all came together. I really wanted to come full circle and have Nickolas return as Andrew. Thanks for reading it :O) I might post tonight. I just have to re-read the first chapter and see if It needs more editing. lol
Date: 02/07/11 01:09 am Title: Chapter 39
Of course you had to end with a cliffy!! lol. So sad that about Nickolas...seems like Nick was going to like having a real brother. That's cool that Max was a good guy, I wasn't expecting that. Sad to see this story coming to an end...and can't wait to see how it'll end.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, Sel. Yes, I had to have a cliffy! lol
Date: 02/06/11 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 39
Great chapter again Mare! But.. you can't let Nick say goodbye to the other guys. It's just not fair! :(
Author's Response:
Thanks and I know :O( Very sad.
Date: 02/06/11 11:04 am Title: Chapter 39
Oh my God, that is so sad! :( I really like your story, just one more chapter! No! *lol* Is there a sequel? *hopeful look* Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading the story Milka. I don't see myself writing a sequel. You never know though lol :O)
