Date: 01/30/11 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 37
Biting my nails at the thought of what will happen in the warehouse! I'm glad Nick only got grazed by the bullet, but I have a feeling something worse than a graze is going to happen to someone.
Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Let's hope you're just being the voice of doom! lol Although it's doubtful ;OP Thanks for reading Steph!
Date: 01/30/11 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 37
Good chapters, Mare! I had a lot of catching up to do, but it's been well worth the read!! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed them. :O)
Date: 01/30/11 07:29 am Title: Chapter 37
Aw boo, the only real updated suspense story is almost over.lol As far as ideas go, you could always cover the "Lou Pearlman" issue, I think you and I talked about writing about that not long after that story broke. I started something, but got distracted by other writing. I foresee a good brotherly-angsty-kevin-back-in-the-picture type story with that. I don't know if that's the direction you want to go in, but just throwin' it out there. : )
Author's Response:
Oooh, I had forgotten all about that. I think I do have my idea already but that's another good one i'll have to think about! I mean come on, Kevin and Nick angst? What's not to love about that? Thanks Sam! lol
Date: 01/30/11 06:30 am Title: Chapter 37
just when i think i've figured out this whole story you upload another chapter and it makes me have no idea of whats going to happen next...
Author's Response:
LOL I hope that's a good thing and not a bad thing? Thanks for reading! :O)
Date: 01/30/11 04:43 am Title: Chapter 37
OMG poor nicky :( LMAO at "street cred" Yeah AJ! Who's the bad Backstreet Boy now ROTF. That was awesome! Loved it!
Author's Response:
THanks Tracy! lol yes he can be a gangsta rapper now!
Date: 01/30/11 03:47 am Title: Chapter 37
I'm so happy Nick wasn't shoot. The pain must be terrible. I'm so excited for what is going to happen! But so sad the story is coming to an end :( Can't wait for more!
Thanks so much! :O)
Author's Response:
Date: 01/30/11 03:37 am Title: Chapter 37
Ooh, another intense chapter - loved it!! I really thought Nickolas was a goner, so I was impressed that you had Nick get shot instead... glad he was only grazed, though. I was cracking up at his line about his therapist being dead, for now, but she'll probably be at the warehouse LOL. The comic relief in this story is great! Also loved Kevin getting bossed around for a change. I'm sad to see this story ending, but excited for the next chapter to find out what happens! I hope you get a new story idea soon; I love having you writing again! I'd love another suspense from you; those are my favorites.
Author's Response:
Thanks Julie! I think i'd love to go suspense again as well. It's just tough coming up with new ideas. Yeah, I knew I wasn't going to let Nicole kill Nickolas, that would be too expected. Yay to the comic relief and yes, it was fun to have Kevin get bossed around! I'm sure he hates it but it serves him right for leaving the group. But at least i'm not killing him....yet! LOL
Date: 01/30/11 03:33 am Title: Chapter 37
Sorry, I didn't know AC would cut off reviews lmfao. I got too wordy. Awesome. So, sorry about all the review notices you'll be getting lmao.
All I wanted to add, as that the line I quoted was definitely a fave. Loved it LOL.
Author's Response:
lmao thanks! I was sitting here and suddenly got like 6 email notifications about reviews and was like "Damn!" Glad you enjoyed that line. I actually added it in after I finished the chapter as an afterthought!
Date: 01/30/11 03:32 am Title: Chapter 37
Awwww Nick got almost-shot! LOL. Poor Nick, because he's not dealing with enough right now. I love how Nick's making jokes throughout the entire thing. I was cracking up, and really, I could see Nick reacting that way. Cause what else can you do but try to make light of it so you don't go insane? LOL. Um...I'll try to come up with an idea for you? But what happened to that one you started before? I've been wanting to see you do it since it's a bit different for you lol.
“But I didn’t and apparently no one in this family actually ever dies anyway.”
Author's Response:
LOL I can see him making jokes and nervously laughing too. The new idea I had i've decided to not make a BSB fic. It wasn't working for me because of the female lead thing. I was hating it. I am still going to work on it but as an OF I think. I might post it on AC, still, just the first chapter but not sure. I'd hate to post it and have people like it and then decide not to do anything with it. Stupid female lead dilemma! Thanks Rose!
Date: 01/24/11 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 36
Mare, I think I saw that episode of Supernatural. Was it the one with the little girl with the dolls house which was a duplicate of the hotel? And the little girl had drowned in the pool?
Author's Response:
Yup, that's the one! lol
Date: 01/24/11 12:21 am Title: Chapter 36
What?! No I did not see that one coming! I am wondering who or what she shot! Evil cliffy, Mare! But the twist of Nicole being alive makes it worth it lol. I also enjoyed the part when Nick was ranting about how no one would teach him how to drive, and when Kevin said "he’d rather teach a retarded gopher how to play tennis" LOL! Loved this chapter, Mare! I am on the edge of my seat for the next one!
Author's Response:
Thanks Steph! lol glad you liked the gopher line. Like I told Tracy, I cracked myself up when I wrote that. Also i'm happy to know you didn't see the twist coming. Sorry about the cliffy, the new chapter is done so you won't have to wait that long! :O) thanks for reading!
Date: 01/23/11 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 36
No, I didn't see that coming! And what a cliffy too! I wonder if she killed herself, killed Nickolas or just fired the gun into the air? Loved that chapter Mare, I could just imagine her sitting in the wheelchair like in some kind of horror film.
Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks Steph! We all have to remember that she is blind as well lol so she could have just hit a wall. lmao We'll have to wait and see. Sorry about the cliffy and just so you know since you are a new Supernatural watcher. I pictured the old lady sitting in a wheelchair scene from the episode where they go to an old hotel and find with the little girl ghost. I don't know if you've gotten there yet. She's who I pictured ion my head when I wrote that scene lol Thanks for reading!!
Date: 01/23/11 08:35 am Title: Chapter 36
Intense stuff. How the heck is Nicole alive? My mind was blown by that! And this made me LOL "Kevin would say things like he’d rather teach a retarded gopher how to play tennis. What the hell does that even mean? Is that some kind of stupid saying in Kentucky?" HA. I also liked the part about Ophelia and Shakespeare lol. Awesome awesome chapter...it had me on the edge of my seat. Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tracy! Also thanks for mentioning my favorite line in the entire chapter. I cracked myself up with the retarded gopher line. I had to put some kind of rodent in this story. It wouldn't be a Me story without including one! LOL Also glad you enjoyed the Ophelia thing as well. That was me trying to be clever. Thanks for the Feedback!
Date: 01/23/11 06:44 am Title: Chapter 36
Okay, I didn't see that one coming. LOL. You'd think I would, seeing as everyone else who "died" is alive in this story. But Nicole? Oddly no. I did love the reaction he had, like part of him was drawn, and part of him knew it was just no good.
I have a feeling older Nickolas will have to suffer the consequences of Nick's words though :(.
You suck for cliffies though!
Author's Response:
LOL this one had to have a cliffy, now that i'm getting to the end, I have to put as many in as possible. I'm glad everyone was surpsied to see her alive. I really thought it was going to be one of those things that people were just kind of waiting to see happen. YAy for not being predictable! Thanks for reading Rose!
Date: 01/23/11 05:42 am Title: Chapter 36
WOW!!! Even after everyone else in this story who Nick thought was dead turned out to be alive LOL, I didn't see that one coming, with him finding Nicole. As soon as he walked into the room and saw the woman in the wheelchair, I knew it had to be her, but up until that point, I had no idea. I'm glad he reacted to her the way he did; even if she was nicer to him than Roger was, the whole kidnapping thing is still creepy and wrong. I liked the comparison to a disappointed fan. Thanks for yet ANOTHER cliffhanger at the end! I'm thinking the older Nickolas is a goner... We shall see!
Author's Response:
I know, this is like the Day of our Lives of fanfic. They die but do they, really? LOL I always knew she was going to be alive but I have to admit she's the only one I ever intended from the beginning to keep alive. Jane was stubbourn and refused to stay dead! I thought it was important for Nick to be angry with her because yes, she did kidnap the poor kid. We shall see if you are correct when it comes to Nickolas. Thanks for reading Julie!
