Date: 07/14/10 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
hey... i really like your story and your style of writing...
when nick says, "he never would do this, when he wasn´t drunk"... i thought WTF!!!!! is he so cocky and cary not sweet enough for him... or something like that....
but then i regret my thoughts!!! he is sick!!! but HOW sick???
very smart from him to take her with them on tour... cary is a two in one package....
please update soon!!!! greetings from austria!!!
Author's Response: Hey, thank you so much! LOL no worries, that's exactly what I wanted you to think... I just wanted it to look like he was gonna make a move on her, and I wanted the readers to be surprised like Cary was, so glad that seemed to work. I'll have the next chapter up soon, either later tonight or tomorrow. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review; I really appreciate it! :)
Date: 07/14/10 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh shit. I knew it was bad. Just how sick is he? I hope not fatally. Of course now I am hook ed have to read the whole thing. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Hehe, you know I can't tell you, but I hope you will read the whole thing! Thanks SO much for your reviews! I should have another chapter up either later tonight or tomorrow. :)
Date: 07/14/10 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
Now I really want to know what Nick's secret is. I bet it is a big one. I wonder if they will fall in love? Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: You'll sort of find out at the end of the next chapter. It is big. I can't answer the love question cause I honestly don't know yet! I'm gonna let the characters decide that one. Thanks so much; I love the chapter-by-chapter reactions! :)
Date: 07/14/10 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
At least she has her family's support. Just be cautious. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Date: 07/14/10 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh I really want to know what the catch is. I have a feeling it's a doozy. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: You might be right on that one too! ;) LOL thanks again!
Date: 07/14/10 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw how sad but I have a feeling that her life is about to change. Keep updates coming.
Marguerite
Author's Response: You would be right! ;) Thanks so much for checking the story out, and thanks for your review!
Date: 07/14/10 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
Another portcath? Damn Julie...what has Nick ever done to you!?!? lmao!!! You think he's sexy with one of those, don'tcha?!?! hehe..
I don't have to tell you how much I love your stories like this one seems to be starting out like. You know that already. You are brilliant when writing about this subject matter and I look forward, very much, to where you take this. You did an excellent job in writing thru Cary's eyes and look forward to Nick's POV.
Great start! Now I see why he chose her...musically inclined AND she's a nurse...very sneeky, he is!! I really like Cary so far. Anyone who has a pet pig is cool in my book! Keep up the great work!! Can't wait for more!!
P.S. As I write this, Thriller is playing...lol!!
Author's Response: LMAO! Poor, poor Nick. I'm sure he would wonder the same thing! Seriously though, thank you so much for checking it out and for your always-awesome feedback - it means so much to me! I'm glad you're liking it so far! And thanks for the feedback on Cary! Like I said in another review response, I never know how female leads are gonna go over (maybe it's cause I'm friends with so many anti-romance people LOL), so it means a lot that you think she's cool so far and liked reading from her POV! I'm gonna switch to Nick's POV in the next chapter, for a few chapters, and then trade off more after that. Should have another update soon! Thanks again, and WHOOOOO-HOO to Thriller! ;)
Date: 07/14/10 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Listen, you. I'd gotten over and past BSB fanfic, and now, between Something Beautiful and this story, you have sucked me right back in! Argh! lol JK. I've always loved your writing style, so I don't mind. You'll just have to keep bumping this on your twitter so I remember that there are updates :P
I like Cary and Nick seems different in this (though it could just be because he's sick). Anyway, anyway...I can't say much more until you UPDATE!
Author's Response: LOL sorry for being a toxic friend and sucking you back in - it's a guilty pleasure! Thanks so much for reading!! You know your feedback means a lot to me. :) Glad you like Cary; I never know how female leads are going to go over, so I was worried about starting this one in her POV. It's going to switch to Nick's POV in the next chapter and then switch back and forth, so you get both sides of the story. Nick seems different in a good or bad way? I dunno, there are so many ways to write Nick, I never really know what I'm doing LOL. Thanks again for the review, Sarah!!
Date: 07/14/10 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
She's at it again! :) Somehow I know this will be brilliant simply because of how well you have mastered the subject matter.
Author's Response: *sigh* I knooow! I can't help it; it wouldn't get out of my head. Thanks for reading it! :) And I hope it will be an improvement over the last story that was similar to this... LOL Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 07/14/10 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow!......
Love this story so far.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I appreciate the review! :)
Date: 07/14/10 11:51 am Title: Chapter 2
What is NIck up to? I can't wait to find out.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Hope you like the rest that's up so far.
Date: 07/14/10 08:46 am Title: Chapter 5
so far you have me addicted to this story lol. can't wait to find out what's next.
Author's Response: That's awesome - thank you!! I appreciate you reading and reviewing! I'll hopefully have another chapter up soon.
Date: 07/14/10 05:30 am Title: Chapter 5
Holy shit!!! What a twist. I was wondering how the medicine was gonna tie in. Wow...that totally surprised me. Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thanks! :) Glad you were surprised. You know me, though, I like my medical drama LOL. Here we go again! Glad you're liking it so far!!
Date: 07/14/10 05:11 am Title: Chapter 2
Great story so far! The opening is great...it's like you're right there on stage with her. And the summary and banner totally caught my attention :)
Author's Response: Thanks Sel! I don't write in first person very often, so I really appreciate that; glad it feels realistic! I wasn't sure about the summary either (thought it was maybe too vague), so thanks for that too! :)
Date: 07/14/10 04:58 am Title: Chapter 1
I told you this, but I love the start. You should totally do first person more. :) And thank you, you're totally DRATW too! hehe.
Besides our ADD Siamuse is love.
Author's Response: Thanks, girl! :) Siamuse IS love. Double rainbow all the way!
