Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
Date: 07/25/10 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh my a date!! That will be very interesting. That man could never be boring. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
Date: 07/25/10 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow great first impression. AJ is defiently a mans man. I think they will be good together. Keep the updates coming.
Marguerite
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 07/25/10 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
This sounds really good. Keep up the excellent work.
MArguerite
Reviewer: sbrown21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
Date: 07/25/10 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
For this to be your first fanfiction I'll say you're off to a pretty good start. Joselyn seems to be a cool character. I like how you did a flashback to how joselyn found out that claude knew bsb. I also like the insight into Joselyn's life growing up. Keep up the good work!
