Date: 11/19/10 08:33 am Title: Chapter 10
oh no, I hope they find him before that monster does! I loved your description I could so picture Nick spraying the monster with the axe deodorant! LOL. I love this can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: I liked Nick fighting off an axe wielding monster with axe deodorant too, lol! Thanks so much for reading :)
Date: 11/19/10 01:26 am Title: Chapter 10
Poor Nick and AJ! (And that sucks for the bus driver! yikes!) I hope Sam and Dean are able to catch up to them in time! This was a great chapter, Steph. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Steph! Yeah that poor bus driver was in the wrong place at the wrong time :(
Date: 11/17/10 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 10
You people and your cliffies!! UGH!!!!!! Axe deodorant? lmao!! Love it!! And I really do...I love the smell of that stuff!! lol HA!! Both Nick and the creature had axes...lmao!! Yes..I'm easily amused..:p
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I know what you mean about cliffies, I'm the same when I read everyone else's stories, lol. I like the smell of that stuff too, it's called Lynx here though (exactly the same stuff, just different name).
Date: 11/17/10 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 10
Aww!! Loved that Nick fought off the monster with Axe deodorant lmao that was clever. Poor bus driver! Better him then one of the guys! I'm sad this is coming to an end :O( Great job Steph!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading Mare! I'm enjoying writing this one and will be sad to finish it, it's been fun trying something different.
Date: 11/14/10 01:02 am Title: Chapter 9
Ack, AJ! I hope Sam and Dean get to them soon! This is really good, Steph! You do a great job of sucking the reader in. I feel like I am right there with them, playing the game. Great chapter, as usual! Also, LOL at AJ enjoying Twilight. That was cute.. I could totally see him liking it, haha.
Author's Response: I can imagine AJ watching Twilight too, hehe. Thanks for reading Steph, glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 11/13/10 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 9
AHH! So, was that the video game AJ that got hit by an axe or the real AJ? LOL excuse my dumb blonde moment. Great chapter. Once agian I have to compliment you on how well you seem to have Sam and Dean's characters down. some of these monsters sound downright scary!! This is why I do not play video games!! Thanks for the update Steph!
Author's Response: It was the video game AJ. Sorry if that didn't come across very well. Thanks for reading and I agree about these monsters being scary, lol :)
Date: 11/09/10 06:42 am Title: Chapter 8
So I just read all 8 chapters in one sit... FYI I never really considered watching supernatural but as tonight I have begun to watch all the episodes... I love this so far nice job. I hope they get to Nick and AJ before its to late...
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it so far! I only got into Supernatural recently, but from the first episode I loved it. I've just started watching series two.
Date: 11/09/10 01:28 am Title: Chapter 8
LOL Dean! I really think some people in the world would miss that Nick Carter dude! I know I would! I think Howie is right about Nick being tamed. I hope AJ and Nick are ok and Sam and Dean are able to get to them in time. Great chapter as always, Steph!
Author's Response: Lol, it seemed like a Dean thing to say :) Thanks for reading Steph!
Date: 11/09/10 12:58 am Title: Chapter 8
aww yes, Dean. The world would miss that Nick Carter dude lol Loved the bit about Brian being forced to whore out the Wylee stuff. I am worried for Nick and AJ. Ack! Can't wait to see what happens next! As usual great chapter and awesome job with Sam and Dean. You'd never know that you only started getting into Supernatural. It's coming very easy for you!
Author's Response: I imagine Brian does have to do a lot with the Wylee stuff, lol, poor guy! Thanks for reading and reviewing Mare :)
Date: 11/07/10 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oooh cliffy! Guess Sam and Dean still have some work ahead of them. I hope Nick and AJ are okay! I also laughed at Nick's scrapbook present from a fan - he really does have some weird fans. Great update, I'm eagerly waiting for the next one :)
Author's Response: Lol, I thought the scrapbook was something a crazy Nick fan would do after seeing some pictures posted somewhere of a girl posing for photos with a cut out of Nick, they were so funny! Thanks for reading Steph, more coming soon, about halfway through writing the next chapter.
Date: 11/03/10 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
ooh mean cliffy! :OP It is fun though, isn't it? lol
Why do I think you are going to kill off AJ? I hope it'snot one of the boys but I can see AJ being eaten by a giant gore or something. Seems like a very AJ way to die!
I like Zach. He reminds me of Bobby on SN. Not sure if you know who he is yet. YAy for two updates in one week! You rock!
Author's Response: I've not got to Bobby in the series yet, I'm slacking and have three more episodes in series one to watch :) Hmm, we'll see if you're right about AJ.
Thanks for reading Mare!
Date: 11/02/10 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 6
Sam and Dean are quite the detectives! Maybe they should work for the FBI for real LOL. And poor Nickers with his bruises... that guy is so accident prone it's no wonder he thinks nothing of them. I really liked this update!
Author's Response: Poor Nick, lol. Thanks for reading Steph :)
Date: 11/02/10 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 6
Uh-oh mysterious bruises is never a good thing! Hurry Sam and Dean! lol Great update! :O)
Author's Response: They're getting there slowly, lol. Thanks for reading Mare :)
Date: 10/24/10 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
I don't mind the bigger font size, easy to read! I hope that Sam and Dean are able to get some info from Selena. Hopefully they will be able to get to AJ and Nick in time! I'm starting to get worried for them, you're doing a really great job creating the build up. I love this story :)
Author's Response: Thanks Steph, I should've written some more yesterday but ended up watching three episodes of Supernatural instead!
Date: 10/23/10 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
aww, I almost missed this. Don't forget to tell us when you update on the MB Steph :O) Now i'm starting to get scared for AJ and Nick with all these creatures possibly looming ready to get them. Yikes! And I teehee'd at the mention of Bloomfield because I lived there for about 8 years. I'm sure it's not my Bloomfield but even still the thought of all my favorite manly men heading there made me giggle. Great chapter! And I kind of also like the bigger font. LOL
Author's Response: I'll remember to put my updates on the MB in future :) The Bloomfield in this story is picked out of BSB tour dates, and obviously I have no idea what it's like there so I'm making it up and hoping it doesn't sound too bad, lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing Mare, more coming in the next couple of days.
