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Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/10 03:58 am Title: Chapter 6

Cliffie!! Interested to see what she'll say. And wonder how Joe will do with Kevin. Something tells me he won't be putting up with shit. Lol

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/10 03:30 am Title: Chapter 6

Well what? Well what?!?! And Brenna is just adorable. :) Wow to Molly confiscating all that liquor from Joe. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Don't you LOVE chapters that end with well? Gotta love beaner...and yeah Joe was stupid enough to think he was going to get away with drinking around Kevin? Puh-lease. The guy's almost done raising TWO teenage boys. The man's a pro by now

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/10 03:15 am Title: Chapter 6

Ok, now that I've caught up, let me say
OMG!!! you sent Joe to Kevin's!!! I just knew it was his best option, so I'm glad you kinda took my opinion into consideration!!!
It's really cool what the twins will be doing.
And I totally cried my eyes out at the family reunion and Ally asking Molly if she was divorcing AJ.
Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: LoL, well I actually had it planned, but it seemed like the best option to ME too :) It works into some plans I have coming up in later chapters. I really loved the scene with Ally and Molly...it was sad but Molly's SUCH a good mom.

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/10 01:53 am Title: Chapter 6

Aaw, Brenna is so cute. And I'm glad Ally is already there, next :D

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/10 01:34 am Title: Chapter 6

Oh yeah Jonah you will learn. Uncle Kevin dealt with your dad & Nick so he has tons of practice. I so hope he doesn't get as bad as his dad did back in the day. Keep up the excellent work.'
Marguerite
P.S. Any chance you could post a pic of Jonah?

Author's Response: Uncle Kevin also dealt with his own ornery son :)

Uh, I don't know about the picture of Jonah. Probably something like this -- http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_KHtLzeb65ls/Sz0fqOt9ApI/AAAAAAAAAZQ/LrLoaGPcqEk/s400/aj_mclean_nude.jpg Without the goatee and big hoop earrings, haha

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/10 01:33 am Title: Chapter 1

I'd be scared if I had to spend the summer with Kevin. :p



NOT ME.....I'd..........well.....anyways.....scaed is not the word! lol

Author's Response: Well you know by Great Divide that Kevin doesn't scare me. There's much better things to do with that man lol

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/10 01:32 am Title: Chapter 6

Well if anyone can straighten Joe out....we all know Kevin is the man for the job~!
Damn Jen.....I was all ready for it! LOL
Just sitting here waitin'..... :P LOL

Author's Response: LoL hopefully Kevin learned a thing or two from the Mason experience. Older and wiser, right?

Reviewer: LAST Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/10 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 5

Awesome. I'd lack to smack Joe upside the head, though. Stupid kid.

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/10 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 5

Joe really need to change, he can keep living like this! I hope with Kevin he realize things, and I hope Ally can spend a good vacation. Update soon :D



Author's Response: I'd be scared if I had to spend the summer with Kevin. :p

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/10 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh lord I hope this family stays together. Sucks that Jonah was right about AJ. I really want to see him stay sober. An poor Molly. Dealing with Aj & Jonah. No matter what he says she is his mom. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: And Molly's a damn good mom at that. She needs some MAJOR R&R to strengthen herself back up. I know ya'all were hoping the stuff about AJ was a lie, but...well, he has a histoy of relapse as we all know.

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/10 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 4

Poor Ally! And Joe... How can he do this to his family? I can't believe it!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/10 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 5

My oh my. So can't wait for more. Amazing job.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/10 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 4

Joe is an asshole. Amazing job.

Author's Response: I will agree that currently he is a major URANUS, teehee

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/10 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 5

I am absolutely loving this story! Ally is such a relatable, likable, and down to earth character. I love Molly as well. Not that I doubted it, but it's great that she's going to stand by her man! Poor AJ for relapsing again. I hope by the end of the story, the family can be on the mend. And finally, the truth about Stefie comes out! I have to say you gave a hint in Kay's story and I had a feeling she was I'll. I didn't even think of lupus though. Poor Howie having to go through all that again! And how said that he and Leigh are divorcing...oh, and is Kevins other son really gay? Hmmm...I remember you hinting at that earlier too.

I LOVE this and can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: All those little tidbits and hints are going to come out now! I'm not sure how much more you'll learn about Stefie in this story, but you'll certainly learn more about Daniel. Ally IS relatable. Not all 16-year olds are sex hounds after all, haha.

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/10 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 5

Wow. So Joe wasn't lying. Man, everything is a mess. And poor Stefie! That's so sad about Howie and Leigh! That makes for a good plot for her story though. ;) I like that you're making Ally and Joe have to spend the summer together, they definitely need to spend some time together to work on their relationship. I can't wait to read how this all continues to unfold, another amazing story so far, Jen. You really don't disappoint. :)

Author's Response: I'm getting a new laptop for Christmas and I REALLY need to organize all my notes before the big transfer. You'd be surprised how many stories I have written in little scraps of documents...including Stefie's story. Joe needs a major overhaul; I think it's a good thing for him to be close to Ally. Not sure if Joe being close will be good for Ally though.