Date: 06/18/12 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ooh, this chapter was exciting! I like how it started with the fight between Brian and Leighanne; I'm sure he's always going to regret not trying harder to make things right with her before he left. I wasn't sure if you were going to have the actual crash landing happen in this chapter or not, but I'm glad you did! Like I said, it was exciting! I'm guessing the blast of heat at the end was a bomb. I'm not sure if the plane took them into a parallel universe or alternate reality or the future or what, but I'm curious to find out, if we ever do. Can't wait to see how the boys react!
Author's Response:
It's funny because I debated on not having the plane land until the next chapter but then decided I had enough things hanging already and thought it was best to get things moving. I'm sure Brian was grateful she wasn't on the plane after seeing what happens to all the misc people in Mare's stories lol Thanks again, Julie. I'm on my iPod so sorry for all the typos in The last response. It was very Cary's dad ish lol
Date: 01/20/12 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 10
wow! they traveled inter-dimensionaly or something. It's the only thing I can think of cause of how my brain works. I am interested to find out what happened an how in the world we let the Canadian's get the upper hand ;) LOL.
Author's Response:
I know right? Damn Canadians! They seem innocent enough with their moose loving, syrup sucking ways but you never know...
Date: 05/24/11 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 10
So glad to see this updated!! I was waiting for this chap, and it was so good! Loved the fight with Leighanne and Brian...she was annoying me. Lol. You did a really good job with the "crash." that was really intense. And what a cliffie!!!
Author's Response:
Sorry it's taken me so long to respond. I have been having issues with the site and IE. I'm glad you're enjoying the story Sel. I'm hoping that after this week i'll have plenty of time to write again1
Date: 05/23/11 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
Arghh, that was a mean cliffy!!! But so happy to see an update for this story, so I forgive the mean cliffy, lol. Great chapter. I loved the description of them on that plane and was thinking about a plane ride I had like that (minus the crashing). I was on a little 8 seater thing over the Grand Canyon and don't mind admitting that I was terrified!
Wonder what brought the plane down and also what's going to happen next. Can't wait for more and hope real life settles down soon :)
Author's Response:
Date: 05/23/11 01:03 am Title: Chapter 10
YAY! I was hoping since I saw you pop into TDS, I would see you update on here too. I'm not in school anymore, but I hate the end of the year schedule. lol
Missed this story a ton, especially with all these romances everywhere. This is probably one of three reasons why I come on here anymore.
Ugh, these chapters are getting harder to get through only because I so badly want the action to start, but looks like that will happen from now on. Can't wait to see what the hell's going on! Thanks for the update Mare, and I know I didn't do it last time, but LOVED the last chapter. Made me really feel for them, esp. Nick wanting to go so Howie could stay...so sad.
Author's Response:
Sorry it's taken me so long to respond. I have been having an issue with IE and this site. I am done with school next Monday so hopefully i'll be able to write some more. I'm sorry i've been lacking onthe updates! Thanks for the support and the reviews!
Date: 05/22/11 04:57 am Title: Chapter 10
Leighanne seems awful clingy!
Talk about flying in a sardine.....yikes!I've flown in a small plane when it was raining and it felt like it was going to come apart. Very realistic, Mare.
Good update! You really have me on the edge of my seat!
Pammy Whammy
Author's Response:
Date: 05/22/11 03:02 am Title: Chapter 10
As much as I hate to say it leighanne is being a bitch in this chapter. Geez give Brian some space! I liked the description of the plane as well....the weird noises and stuff. Nick is already afraid of planes, I am sure this isn't helping. Can't wait for the next chapter, loving this story as I have said before :)
Author's Response:
Date: 05/22/11 02:47 am Title: Chapter 10
Poor Brian, I do sometimes feel Leighanne invades his life way too much. I can only imagine what it was like when she first started doing that to him. Loved the ending. You're not allowed to make me wait this long next time okay?
Also, your apocalypse majorly beats out today's Apocalypse FAIL. lol
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