Date: 06/20/12 04:31 am Title: Chapter 12
Ooh, this chapter was even creepier than the last one! You did a great job building the suspense. I felt the same ominous feeling that Nick did, and when they saw the sea of dead birds in the road and the spray-painted sign saying "This is the end," I literally got goosebumps. I still have them now as I'm typing this. Very eerie - I love it!!
Author's Response:
Yay! Goosebumps are always a good thing. Thanks, Julie! I loved writing the crunching sounds as they walked on the dead birds lol
Date: 01/20/12 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
oooh the birds falling dead from the sky... did you write this before or after it actually happened? LOL. I really want to know what happened and what the hell is going on.
Author's Response:
I actually wrote that before it happened. I also came up with Trump being president before he thought about running. I was and still occasionally freak myself out with the stuff going on in this story lol
Date: 07/11/11 01:04 am Title: Chapter 12
Okay the dead birds is flat out CREEPY lol. I love it! And I'm with AJ and Nick, don't go following random people in a situation like that! It'll get you killed! Oiy...
Yay for the wait not being long BTW! LOL
Author's Response:
Yup, dead birds for miles = creepy lol especially if you see it the same way I do in my head. LOL Thanks Rose!
Date: 07/10/11 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 12
You know, this story has turned really creepy! Just the kind of tale I love, because every chapter raises a questionmark. You're weaving a very complex and interesting story, and I'll be checking for updates ruthlessly. Keep up the wonderful work.
Author's Response:
Thanks Louise, glad to know you're reading this and also nice to see you back and writing again! I'm hoping to update this one a little more regularly :O)
Date: 07/10/11 08:44 am Title: Chapter 12
“Really, because they seem to want no part of us.” I wasn’t about to go out on some goose chase only to find ourselves smack in the middle of Deliverance or Misery.
I had to chuckle there because I'm with AJ.....ain't no way I would be following those people.
Again, Mare, you have done a great job of creating this ominous setting. Thanks for the update!
Pammy Whammy
Author's Response:
Thanks Pammy! :O)
Date: 07/10/11 01:47 am Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter Mare! It's hard to imagine it all happened during the flight and I can't wait to find out! Spooky with the dead birds, snow in May and people ready to kill. can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks Steph, yeah I can only imagine what that would be like. To not now what the heck is going on.
Date: 07/10/11 12:42 am Title: Chapter 12
Wow scary stuff....Nick is gonna be traumatized After all of that. Great update!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tracy! Yup he and all the others. LOL poor guys!