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Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/12 04:31 am Title: Chapter 12

Ooh, this chapter was even creepier than the last one! You did a great job building the suspense. I felt the same ominous feeling that Nick did, and when they saw the sea of dead birds in the road and the spray-painted sign saying "This is the end," I literally got goosebumps. I still have them now as I'm typing this. Very eerie - I love it!!

Author's Response:

Yay! Goosebumps are always a good thing. Thanks, Julie! I loved writing the crunching sounds as they walked on the dead birds lol

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/12 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 12

oooh the birds falling dead from the sky... did you write this before or after it actually happened? LOL.  I really want to know what happened and what the hell is going on.



Author's Response:

I actually wrote that before it happened. I also came up with Trump being president before he thought about running. I was and still occasionally freak myself out with the stuff going on in this story lol

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/11 01:04 am Title: Chapter 12

Okay the dead birds is flat out CREEPY lol. I love it! And I'm with AJ and Nick, don't go following random people in a situation like that! It'll get you killed! Oiy...

Yay for the wait not being long BTW! LOL

Author's Response:

Yup, dead birds for miles = creepy lol especially if you see it the same way I do in my head. LOL Thanks Rose!

Reviewer: Louise Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 12

You know, this story has turned really creepy! Just the kind of tale I love, because every chapter raises a questionmark. You're weaving a very complex and interesting story, and I'll be checking for updates ruthlessly. Keep up the wonderful work.



Author's Response:

Thanks Louise, glad to know you're reading this and also nice to see you back and writing again! I'm hoping to update this one a little more regularly :O)

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 08:44 am Title: Chapter 12

“Really, because they seem to want no part of us.” I wasn’t about to go out on some goose chase only to find ourselves smack in the middle of Deliverance or Misery.  

I had to chuckle there because I'm with AJ.....ain't no way I would be following those people.

Again, Mare, you have done a great job of creating this ominous setting.  Thanks for the update!

Pammy Whammy



Author's Response:

Thanks Pammy! :O)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 01:47 am Title: Chapter 12

Great chapter Mare! It's hard to imagine it all happened during the flight and I can't wait to find out! Spooky with the dead birds, snow in May and people ready to kill. can't wait for more :)

Author's Response:

Thanks Steph, yeah I can only imagine what that would be like. To not now what the heck is going on.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 12:42 am Title: Chapter 12

Wow scary stuff....Nick is gonna be traumatized After all of that. Great update!!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tracy! Yup he and all the others. LOL poor guys!