Date: 06/20/12 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 16
Aww, this was a sad chapter, but I'm glad Kevin and Brian made it. I hope Brian's okay; I wonder if he has internal injuries or something beneath that bruise on his stomach. I felt so bad for him when he was lying under the rubble, not sure if Kevin had survived, thinking about suicide. I did appreciate this line though: "Whenever I heard people talk about when they almost tried to kill themselves or wished they were dead, it would really piss me off." ;)
Author's Response:
I don't remember this one lol I might have to go back and check it out. And lmao thanks! Glad you liked that line. So, true! "I'm leaving this time...I mean it!!" ;)
Date: 01/20/12 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 16
I hate that you left the chapter to zoom to the future but I know those people surrounding them didn't kill them because of the future scenes but ugh I want to know. Also, are Kevin and Brian going to show up AFTER Nick and Howie leave!!!! and WHO is AJ with and what is going on there... soo many questions.....
Author's Response:
LOL thanks again for all these reviews and for reading this one. I'm not sure what made you decide to give it a try, but i'm glad you did.
Date: 07/28/11 06:35 am Title: Chapter 16
Very emotional. I'm a little like Brian in that I don't like people to see me crying. It's not that I'm really embarass; it's just that my grief is private.
Thanks for the update, Mare.
Pammy Whammy
Author's Response:
I am the same exact5 way as well. Although i do get embarassed and I also don't like to make people feel uncomfortable. Thanks Pammy! :O)
Date: 07/27/11 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 16
This is my first review on this story. I have to say that I love it, the plot is so unique and the alternating between "past present" and "future" is what keeps high the attention. =)
I have the feeling the Brian might have hurt himself. So we have, for now, Nick sick and Brian may hurt... Frick&Frack, always together even in sickness and hurt? lol
Good work, I love your writing and how you write suspense and drama!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review. It's always nice to know that there are more than 4 people reading this story lol I'm also very happy to hear that you like the past present and future jumping. It's something I was kind of nervous about. :O)
Date: 07/27/11 07:55 am Title: Chapter 16
LOL no worries I will always read the whole chapter, and most of the chapters now are full of very vital things that we need to know for the story. Hey 100, 100, that's pretty cool, I tell you what, I'll have a cookie here at home in honor of that.
Author's Response:
Excellent, have one for me too! I do not have anything sweet in the house :O( lol
Date: 07/26/11 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 16
Go you! I'm happy to see fast updates. Good to see that Brian was alright, shame about the others though. Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks Steph! I actually just updated again if you can believe that! lol
Date: 07/26/11 08:26 am Title: Chapter 16
Is it bad that I could care less about future AJ? lol I'm just sitting here going, "WHEN ARE THEY GOING TO MEET AGAIN!!!" lol You're killing me with that, seriously. I'm loving that we're back in the present again too, or the future or whatever, but it still feels like there's so much to catch up on at the same time. Can't wait for more...hopefully soon again. lol
Author's Response:
Aww, that's okay Sam. Honestly, i'd probably fee the same way if I was reading it. LOL I have to move forward before I go backward again though, if that makes any sense? To fully understand what happened the Museum of Art, AJ needs to start telling that story as a memory in the future. We are going back to the present after AJ's, I promise! And AJ's won't really be that long so feel free to do what I probably would do. Skim through but don't skip the dialogue! lmao I suck as a writer telling my readers to skim! Thanks for being my 100th review on my 100th page of the story! You should get a cookie for that or something.
Date: 07/26/11 01:04 am Title: Chapter 16
Brian, you realize how lucky you are? Mare could've maimed or crippled you! LOL. But seriously, I like how you took us through Brian's wave of emotions. I can easily see why he'd want to just give up now. But when Kevin finds him, it brings back his will to live instantly.
Poor Scott, I liked the Home Sweet Home gravestone LOL. It's wrong that I laugh, but I'm that twisted too! :). Great chapter, look at us updating regularly.. :)
Author's Response:
LOL I know, I laughed at my own warped sense of humor as well. Thanks Rose! I hope we can keep it up as well. Usually all the regular updates eventually equals an epic fail!
Date: 07/26/11 01:01 am Title: Chapter 16
Poor Brian....I'm glad he and Kevin weren't hurt. I can't imagine how scared they must be...still in the dark and unaware of how all of this happened. Loving the updates!!!
Author's Response:
I know! Scary times for the guys! Thanks Tracy! :O)
