Date: 07/02/12 04:27 am Title: Chapter 25
Ohhh, so this is the blast that got them separated! We've come full circle. Cool! I liked the part when Brian was thinking of how much he wished had one of those itineraries from management and how he'd give anything to be running away from overexcited teenies instead of running for his life. Just goes to show how much we take for granted. The little things we complain about in our everyday lives are usually not worth complaining about when you stop and think how much worse it could be. I thought it was creative how you jumped back and forth to tell the story out of order, but I think I will enjoy reading it just in one time period from now on. I'm anxious to find out what's happening with Howie and Nick now that Don and Charlie showed up to save them!
Author's Response:
I hat my iPod lol I had just typed a huge reply and then accidentally it return and it disappeared! I was saying that being grateful for what you have is an underlying theme of this story. It's the main reason I started it in flashbacks. I wanted to show how simple and happy life was for them before this happened and yet they all were to an extent, unhappy and whiny. Show you to never take things for granted because at the end of the day, you never know. I'm so happy you picked up on that, thanks!! And yes, now that we are at the blast, starting next chapter we move only ahead lol the first time you said that way at the beginning I was thinking uh oh but this time it's for reels! Lmao
Date: 01/21/12 05:14 am Title: Chapter 25
Man there are a lot of dead/missing/hiding people!!
Author's Response:
I guess we'll call them maheeple! lmao
Date: 09/20/11 07:58 am Title: Chapter 25
Of course AJ says they finally get a break, so they don't. Typical! LOL. I'm worried about Nick, at least psychologically. :(
Author's Response: Aww I know, poor Nick. :O(
Date: 09/09/11 01:28 am Title: Chapter 25
Okay....I'm falling behind! The Boys can't seem to catch a break, here! So is this the point of separation? Sorry for the late review, Mare. But again, good job of weaving this tale!
Pammy Whammy
Author's Response: Yup, this is where the boys all get separated at the beginning of this story. It's okay, we're all pretty busy these days. I just appreciate the fact that you are reading and giving feedback when you can! :O)
Date: 09/07/11 04:13 am Title: Chapter 25
MAAAAAAAAAAAREEEEEEEEEE!!! Can you update... soon again... please? ;)
Author's Response: I shall try to update this weekend. Nice to know you're reading it, Reb. :O)
Date: 09/05/11 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 25
Argh cliffy!!! But I do love this story so will forgive you, lol. I'd rather a crowd of teens running after me too, rather than what they are facing right now.
Author's Response: LOL thanks! Yeah, im' sure screaming teenies is nothing after this stuff! Poor guys!
Date: 09/05/11 03:35 am Title: Chapter 25
Nice cliffie! You're killing me! Just when things were looking up...thanks for another update!
Author's Response: LOL sorry, you know me and cliffies! Thanks Sel! :O)
Date: 09/04/11 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 25
Wow they can't catch a break huh?! Nick makes me so sad :( I hate seeing him so withdrawn and quiet but it adds to the story because what they are going through is pretty frightening. Awesome chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks Tracy! :O)
