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Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/12 01:24 am Title: Chapter 30

Wow, this chapter was intense. You know it's bad when Brian starts thinking about suicide again. Alan was really brave to sacrifice himself to get the guys into the city. I'm glad Kevin didn't have to do it, though LOL. The two teams thing will be interesting; I can't wait to see if they succeed at their separate missions, or if the whole plan fails epically. Guess it might depend on which ending I choose! LOL I'm seriously looking forward to getting to that point where it splits.

Author's Response:

Aww, the choose your own ending doesn't really happen until the end and it's not the classic CYOA set up. It was too difficult to do it on AC so I had people decide in a decision & based on that, there were three different ways to go. Since no one picked Thr third option it was scraped lol anyway, I hope you like that part when you get to it! 

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/11 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 30

Aw poor Alan, but hopefully he'll be rescued.  The talk of spam and rotting bodies in the water is not doing my already queasy stomach any good, lol!  But really enjoyed this chapter and just hope they manage to swim to safety.  Can't believe you're at chapter 30 either, time flies :)



Author's Response: Hehe sorry about that! hope you feel better. Drinking less might help :OP llmao Thanks for reading, Steph!

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/11 01:48 am Title: Chapter 30

Oh my, so they got that ferry guy to help them across, but poor Alan. :( And I'm with Brian on feeling uneasy on who to trust... these guys could easily turn them in and just save and worry about themselves, but they're luckily helping them, and I hope their good nature continues! Great update Mare, can't wait for the next one! :)



Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Reb! :O)

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/11 01:14 am Title: Chapter 30

Oh Alan!  What a noble scarifice.  Nothing is ever easy for our little group.  But, I am glad they left that group of hopelessness. 

Now, I'm anxious to see if this plan will work!

Thanks for the update, Mare.

Pammy Whammy



Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read, Pammy! :O)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/11 12:28 am Title: Chapter 30

I had to smile at when they talked about the spam tasting better when its cooked, cause that's the truth lol. I love the descriptions in this chapter, it makes everything seem more realistic. I hope nothing happens in the water and they make it across, but I am so worried about Nick and Howie. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: I used the cooked Spam part because of what you and Reb both said about it. LOL Thanks for the review, Tracy! :O)