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Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/12 10:22 am Title: Chapter 39 (a)

Yay, I finally hit the part where it splits! I think I'm gonna try to read the whole A track tonight and go back for the B next time so I don't get them confused. AJ's anger in this chapter was totally justified, but I'm glad he was able to calm down. I'm glad they brought the other Nick in to help him. I can't imagine how freaky that must be, to be looking at a clone that looks and sounds just like your dead friend. I wonder how different from our Nick he really is, just from his different experiences in this world. The end of this chapter was so sad, with Brian sitting in the dark room with dead Nick, reliving the memory of him being afraid to be alone when he was younger. It seems like that will lead to some compassion for the other Nick, who might be struggling with the same thing.

Author's Response:

Good, I'm glad you chose to read it that way. I would recommend doing one track at a time but as I was writing it,  sure people just read one then the other. That was one of the big challenges when it came to the CYOA thing. I'm glad you found AJ's anger justified and I felt bad for poor Brian in this one too. :-( poor other Nick. It's fun having two Nicks to torture!

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/12 12:33 am Title: Chapter 39 (a)

I understand AJ's anger and this small part of me was saying "do it, AJ."  But, I was really glad AJ did not kill the kid....after all, he is Nick.  However, I don't know if I could be as caring as Howie.

On to part B, Mare.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Pammy. I thought it was important to show two sides of Nick. This one is probably how I'd react. Defensive yet scared to death. I could see AJ being that angry but I don't think he would ever actually kill him. 

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/12 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 39 (a)

Well don't kill him, take him with. Sure there will an ajustment but eventually things will be okay and you can record Black and Blue and Never Gone and more... leave without him and your career will be over too AJ. :p  LOL.  Love it, on to the next.



Author's Response:

Maybe? Or maybe things would be even worse lol one never knows although I cant see AJ actually killing anyone. Hehe 

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/12 11:54 am Title: Chapter 39 (a)

I can understand AJ and Howie's reactions.  He did kill their Nick, but he is still Nick.  I don't think I could kill him either, he was only defending himself and would've ended up dead if he hadn't killed Nick.  Plus their Nick was in a bad way and might've died anyway. 

Loving that there are two paths to read Mare :)



Author's Response:

I don't think I could do it either. Like Nick said, if AJ was in his position he would have done the same thing. Thanks, Steph!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/12 02:19 am Title: Chapter 39 (a)

Kind of surprised at AJ, but again...not that surprised he reacted the way he did. I mean, he did kill their Nick. He's angry and wants to avenge him. This is getting so good (not that it hasn't been) but I love it so much. Onto the next chapter :)

Author's Response:

Thanks, Tracy! I wanted to make AJ be the really angry one. I always felt like he is really protective of Nick. Curious what you'll think about the b chapter.