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Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/12 05:32 am Title: Chapter 39 (b)

Okay, now for the B ending! I loved all the info about what the Canadians were doing to the kids in this one. I always wondered about that, and the A track didn't really address it. It does sound like Hitler youth, and the torture Nick described sounds awful. No wonder kids were killing themselves. It's interesting that they brought up the idea of taking him with them earlier in this version than in the other version, where they really DID take him. Did you do that to throw people off as far as which ending was which? Looking forward to more back story in the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks! You know this track was always the 'real' track! so it was going to be the one with all the answers. And yes, I did make it appear that this was the version that would have Nick live for a twist and for the most part it worked the way I wanted it to. hehe! I also wanted anyone who chose track A which again I knew would be most of you, want to be curious enough to check out track B and by ending it the way I did, I was hoping it would spark people to read the B track. You're the first person I know who is reading after it's all been posted so i'll be curious to see if anyone else will read B after A. :O)

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/12 01:01 am Title: Chapter 39 (b)

I like this, Mare.  He's the same character but I'm getting two very different views of him.  The Nick of Part A is so angry, but in survivalist mode....him or me.  Whereas the Nick of Part B seems, to me, more frightened and running  back to his comfort....his "big  brothers." 

The Canadiens using brainwashing to use kids as their fighting force is a brilliant idea, even if it is immoral. 

AJ, going back and forth between anger and sympathy toward Nick is understandable.....I find myself doing the same thing.  However, what surprised me was Brian and Kevin's reactions. 

I'm will look forward to reading more.

Great job, Mare!



Author's Response:

Thanks again! This time it's Brisn who is angry and not quite as forgiving but Nick is softer. It's kind of fun writing two versions of the same thing lol

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/12 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 39 (b)

oooh molding the kids to fight their own friends and family! that is cruel! Canadian's are mean behind that nice person facade. They are faking it so they can attack us at the right moment!!!   OOOOOH we should just stop it now and attack them first. lol.  ;) 



Author's Response:

Those Canadians aren't all sunshine & roses. I blame my sister for marrying I one! Thanks, Lore :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/12 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 39 (b)

Yes, I like this version!  Poor Nick, I feel so sorry for him.  He had it really bad and suffered for a long time before giving in.  He might not be their Nick, but he is Nick in every way, even down to the same whining.

Can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

I thought it was important to let people see what this other Nick has been through and that there will be more victims if the city explodes lol thanks for reading both versions! 

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/12 04:29 am Title: Chapter 39 (b)

Ooh. I love this as well. I liked hearing things from the other Nick and finding out what they did in the camps...what happened to the kids and all. Very good chapter. Looking forward to the rest, I'm glad you decided to post both of them!

Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed both of them. I'm glad it wasn't confusing.