Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/11 02:52 am Title: Chapter 15

And the creepiness continues.....Philadelphia a seeming ghost town, actual gallows at the museum, and men with weapons seemingly coming out of nowhere,  And oh yeah.....the Backstreet Boys finding pamphlets on how to hunt and kill celebrities!

Have I mentioned to you how wicked this storyline is?

Great update, Mare!

Pammy Whammy

Author's Response:

Yes, you may have mentioned it was a little wicked. LOL Thanks Pammy!

Reviewer: starbeamz2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/11 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 14

So instead of leaving a review per chapter, I thought i'd leave one big one...although, if you'd like, I could go back and review every single one separately ;)

I don't know how you do it, because I've tried a million times, but you always manage to create the perfect, creepy atmosphere in all of your stories. I don't know what words you use or what magic dust you sprinkle, but reading each chapter made me feel dread, nervousness, and...awe of the world you created. I am so curious as to how the weather changed in less than an hour from May to December; I want to know why Canada suddenly attacked the US (although I'm sure Julilly could give us a bunch of reasons for that lol); and I really want to know why celebrities are being hunted down and killed. I mean, I've often felt murderous when it comes to the Kardashians and Paris Hilton and most reality stars, as well as Jennifer Love Hewitt lol, but to offer rewards for celebrities? And, oh, how did whoever it is that is attacking manage to change the world from loving celebs, like the screaming fans in the hotel lobby, to hunting them down within hours? Oh and why do Howie and Nick need to look older? Is there some sort of hunt going on for youth?

Mare! Why do I have more questions than answers?! Y U NO WRITE FASTER?! Between this story and Undead, I have so many questions and need more chapters ASAP. I think that must be a sign of some excellent writing :)

P.S. I think Diddy was Puff Daddy and not P.Diddy yet in 1999 lol That man. Too many name changes :/

P.P.S. I love how part of your personal opinions of people like Leighanne manage to eke into your stories. It's especially evident in Nick's chapters :P

P.P.P.S. (<--Is that even the right thing? Should it be PPSS? lol) I may have more things to say so I may be back :)

Author's Response:

Thanks Sarah! One long review is fine. LOL YEah, here's a lot of unanswered questions but as we go along, more stuff will be revealed. You know how I work by now. I'm already working on the next chapter so hopefully i'll get another update out pretty soon. LMAO about Puffy piddy fluffenstuff. I forgot he was puff daddy. I'm sure he'll get over it. Leighanne is a douche, not a personal opinion but fact! :OP I thikn it is P.P.P.S, but I have no clue. Julie would know! I'm glad you're enjoying this and I never thought you were an asshole for not reading it!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 10:58 am Title: Chapter 14

Wow, that was a quick update!  Funny you should mention the beep like a fire alarm with the battery running out as my fire alarm started doing that this morning, how weird is that!

Good thing they kept listening to the radio and heard that message.  Hopefully nothing will come and get them, and at least they know where to head to, if they can get that far.

Great chapter, can't wait for more :)

Author's Response:

I know! I can't believe I managed to update that quickly either lol whoa, that is weird! No one started talking out of it, did they? Thanks Steph!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 08:03 am Title: Chapter 13

I loved the chants LMAO.

Those poor Boys, they're gonna end up with hypothermia at this rate. And geeze! Dead squirrels too! One while trying to eat? :(

That's worse than the birds! LOL

Author's Response:

I enjoy chanting myself. I have a fun cleaning chant. Aww I know! but at least we didn't see the squirrels! LOL Thanks Rose!

Reviewer: Sam_noelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/11 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 13

Yay, I love that you're updating this so regularly now, I appreciate it. It's a nice thing to look forward to at the end of a busy week. I kind of like how you're keeping the story in one time now, just because the "current" time period was so stressful, with Nick being sick and the guys all separated, it's nice to get some background too.

I like Nick being the quiet/freaked out one in all of this. They're all kind of not acting like themselves which makes it seem like there is really something out of whack here. Thanks again for the update, hope you have a good week and are enjoying your time off for summer!

Author's Response:

Thanks Sam! I didn't see this review before. We are going to hop back into the future after Brian's chapter, but yes, I enjoy being in one place at one time. I am also enjoying my break :O)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/11 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 13

Having to trample over those dead birds was something I couldn't do!  But rather that than cute little furry creatures.  I hope the snow is OK and they don't get ill, that would be terrible.  10 miles in those conditions must feel more like 100 miles :(

Great chapter, can't wait for more :)

Author's Response:

Aww I know! I wouldn't be able to stomach seeing or walking over furry things either. Thanks Steph!

Reviewer: Louise Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/11 12:59 am Title: Chapter 13

Aw, jeeze, the squirrels too! You're seriously creeping me out now. Watches all stopped at the same time... need I say I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter? Great storytelling!

Author's Response:

I know! It was painful to kill the squirrels but at least they didn't have to walk all over them, right? Thanks for reading, Louise. Hopefully i'll get an update out again next weekend!