Date: 06/23/12 06:54 am Title: Little Longer
I didn't think this chapter was boring at all :) lots of info. Nick is finally deciding what he wants and it doesn't look like Tiffany is ready to jump into marriage. Will read more a bit later, break is over :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad. Sometimes I write chapters and feel like they are just fillers. I'm glad you didn't find it boring. Yes Tiffany is more occupied with her work... Thank you Tracy
Date: 06/23/12 06:53 am Title: Little Longer
I didn't think this chapter was boring at all :) lots of info. Nick is finally deciding what he wants and it doesn't look like Tiffany is ready to jump into marriage. Will read more a bit later, break is over :)
Date: 06/22/12 01:55 pm Title: Songbird
Things are getting steamy here. ;) I like that Nick told her how he feels while she was sober rather than drunk. However, I wonder what Nick will do when he finds out Tiffany is messing around. Very interesting....
Author's Response:
I'm not big on sex scenes so I took the slow and easy approach. lol. Yes, I fought on having him
Say it then take it back once she was sober, but the that would mean more drama and they have enough. Hehe. Nickight raise hell not might not care and find it as a way out. Thank you Tracy
Date: 06/22/12 01:51 pm Title: Pina Coladas
This was a funny scene again. The comedy is really keeping the story interesting, and like I said in the last few reviews I love how awkward you make Nick, it makes him very relatable and likable. Reading On :)
Author's Response:
I thought of making this comical from the beginning. So that it wouldn't be the usual sappy romance (although I love writing those too) I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Thank you so much Girl!
Date: 06/22/12 01:45 pm Title: Snitch
Okay so Rochelle needs to mind her damn business. I can see the claws coming out at some point. Of course Nick is still heavily in denial. Reading on!
Author's Response:
We always gotta have a bitch in our story and in this one I had to make it the monkey! Ugh although she is my fave BSB lady! Hehehe yes he is...someone knock some sense into him. Thank you Tracy
Date: 06/22/12 12:15 pm Title: I Need
Wow Nick cannot catch a break. I love how you like to put him in awkward situations and get him all flustered. ;) I love how you write Nick. He comes off confident but deep down he really isn't, just like Abby...who I also am enjoying. There are so many layers and I love to see that in a story which is really great :)
Author's Response: To me he just seems that way. People seem to adore him because of his looks, but he's also struggled so much trying to feel comfortable in his own skin. Thank you Tracy for that comment. You write Nick awesomely too! ;)
Date: 06/18/12 11:27 am Title: I Need
God damn it Tiffany you lying bitch lol. She disappointed me but I understand her reasoning for not telling him. I really think Nick knows a lot more than he lets on, he's not a idiot. Oh geez. I had to LOL at AJ, he brought a bright moment in at the end. Reading on...
Author's Response:
Hahaha poor Tiffany got cussed out so much in this story. It's funny. Definitely Nick knows something is up. Oh AJ I always have fun writing him...he's the comic relief.
Date: 06/18/12 11:22 am Title: Bigger
Good, they are gonna have a talk....but I do see a big fight or something else coming out of this. I don't think Tiffany is gonna be too happy, or maybe she will confess her little liaison? Here's to hoping. Great chapter, reading on.
Author's Response: Yeah I'm not sure this dinner is such a great idea for them. Then again they both have things to confess! Eek thank you Tracy!
Date: 06/18/12 11:16 am Title: So Close
I knew Tiffany was cheating! I feel so smart right now. But Nick really needs to figure out what he wants or he will end up driving everyone away. Great dramatic conflict, I like that each chapter is different from the last. Awesome job again!
Author's Response:
Hehehe...you is smart girl! Yes he does...you're right! Thank you Tracy for the review and compliment.
Date: 06/18/12 10:41 am Title: Confused
I knew it....things are starting to get awkward for them. I think Nick's little jealous ways will only hurt him, although I think it is cute for them to see them falling for each other. Looking forward to the next chapter...
Author's Response:
Hehe although they want to deny it, sometimes it's a bit obvious. Denial. lol. thank you Tracy
Date: 06/18/12 10:37 am Title: Mr. Twinkie
LMAO poor Nick. He just gets into the most ridiculous situations. I loved this chapter, he was so funny and the poor thing gets poison oak...there. I was laughing so hard I cried. Probably my favorite chapter so far. Loving this!
Author's Response: Woohoo! So glad it made you laugh...what else could happen to him right?!? Hahaha he's so stubborn that's why. Thanks so much Tracy!
Date: 06/18/12 10:32 am Title: Smile
Oh my. This....um...led to some interesting visuals for me. Haha. Very nice. I liked that Nick felt awkward and I'm guessing he wanted Abby there as a comforting presence? That's the only reasoning I have for him taking her there. Great chapter again, Erika!
Author's Response: This chapter was actually a bit hard for me I rewrote it a few times cause it was either over the top or a bit porno. lmao at you having visuals. I think that although nick looks good and healthy his insecurities proly haunt him sometimes, so although Jim and Abby have drama...like you said it gives him comfort. I wouldn't mind accompanying him lol.
Date: 06/18/12 10:19 am Title: Apology Accepted
Great chapter. I think Nick's gonna wind up getting himself into trouble with this photo shoot. I liked Brian's reaction when he told him Abby was coming along, it was perfect. I love the dialogue so far as well.
Author's Response: I see Brian as this righteous person who wants everyone to stay out of trouble. What guy takes a girl he's trying to stay away from to a half naked photoshops. Only Nick Carter lol. Thanks girlie!0
Date: 06/18/12 10:12 am Title: Pixie
LMAO. This chapter had me rolling. Nick and his little rat dog....it sounds to me like he's whipped and doesn't want anything with Tiffany. They seem like an oddly matched couple, I am not seeing their relationship lasting to the wedding. Great chapter again, very well done!
Date: 06/18/12 09:50 am Title: Calla Lilies
These two fight like they are the ones getting married lol! I think something might be going on with Tiffany and her boss, something sounds fishy to me there. Loving the story so far, gonna keep reading :)
Author's Response: Tiffany does seem very dedicated to her boss...Iran her job. Hmmm...
I thought it would it would be funny that they bicker all the time lol. I'm glad you are loving it. Thanks Tracy!
