Date: 06/13/12 12:41 pm Title: Cheater
Ooh, awkward. Poor Abby. I don't really feel sorry for Nick, I mean...he cheated on his fiancé by kissing her sister. So yeah. No points for Carter. Things are probably gonna get even more awkward aren't they? Reading on...
Author's Response: I hadn't really thought of it as cheating, but you're right. lol. Oh it definitely gets more awkward. Thank you Tracy. Sorry for the late replies...
Date: 06/13/12 12:33 pm Title: Need a Favor
Ooh that is a surprise, Nick is with Tiffany. I was not expecting this at all. I wonder what will happen now. Although I am curious as to why AJ was setting Nick up if he's seeing someone. I must have missed something here. Great so far, reading on!
Author's Response:
Haha surprise surprise! I thought that would be a good twist to the story. Nick is a bit confused and messed up which makes him make bad decisions. Thank you Tracy!
Date: 06/13/12 12:07 pm Title: Shoot
Still enjoying the story. I am guessing Nick is some sort of model by the sounds of things. I love Abby's character. She is strong but does have weak points, I like her a lot. I like that you've kept the other boys in and AJ and Rochelle are together.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you are enjoying JOK! I thought I would make Abby a bit stronger than most of my female leads. I imagine that Ro and AJ are so in love and that they are silly around each other, that they would be some fun comic relief. Thank you tracy.
Date: 06/13/12 10:22 am Title: The Kiss
Great first chapter, I liked the IM convo and the banter between the different characters. The dialogue has been really enjoyable and I can tell already I will like this story. Loving it so far!
Author's Response:
Yay! I'm glad that you started and that you are loving it! Thank you Tracy!
Date: 12/31/11 09:59 pm Title: Elizabeth
Aww that was amazing Erika and such a lovely ending too! I'm glad everything turned out OK with Tiffany too, I knew she'd end up with ther boss.
Date: 12/25/11 04:27 am Title: Elizabeth
Lmao. Loved the pun at the end. Glad everything worked out Ok in the end.
~Lenni~
Date: 12/24/11 08:39 pm Title: Elizabeth
Oh this was a wonderful ending. Finally they have their baby girl and she made peace with her family. Excellent story and ending. I can't wait to read more from you.
Marguerite
Date: 12/24/11 06:35 pm Title: Elizabeth
Aww what a sweet ending.. loved it Erika!! I liked the ending... *muah* thank you for my "present"
Date: 12/24/11 05:56 pm Title: Elizabeth
*wipes tears* awww very cute ending. So nice I enjoyed your story. :) love it
Date: 12/24/11 03:54 pm Title: Elizabeth
Awwwwwwww....i feel in love with this story...and its done! Tbat was awesome sweetie! Just perfect! And a great ending!
Author's Response:
AW *squee* I'm so glad you loved it! That means a lot to me. I was so nervous...
Thank you Resa for giving my story a chance and for the uplifting reviews. YOu are awesome!
Date: 12/24/11 07:11 am Title: Games
Lmao! Damn bicky boy.....catch on quick dont ya! But ta for her! Love that shes with him!
Date: 12/23/11 04:09 am Title: Games
I'm glad that Annie help open Abby's eyes that Nick is the man for her and to go get him before it is too late. I can't wait to see what's in store once her dad and the bitch of a step sister and mother once they found out. That Nick and Abby are together and started a family. I can't wait for Tina or whatever her name is to choke on whatever she did to poor Nick because Abby will get her wedding and family she always wanted. Please post some great stories. <3<3<3<3 :-)
Date: 12/22/11 11:42 am Title: Games
Aww I'm so glad they are back together and she decided to get that plane!
Date: 12/21/11 03:28 pm Title: Games
Go get your man! oh she already did haha....thanks for the update!
Date: 12/21/11 07:26 am Title: Games
About damn time one of the sisters had common sense. Now to shove it in her *&)*&^*&^%$%(&*%^*%%^ fathers face. I hope you are considering a sequel. Excellent work as always.
Marguerite
