Date: 02/21/13 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 25
I can't wait to see what else is in store. I mean someone has to die right? this can't be all "aww so sweet" moments :p
You'll have to wait and see, but you're right, it can't all be sweet and fluffy LOL. Thanks for reading Lore :)
Date: 02/21/13 04:09 am Title: Chapter 25
Thanks for another update. I find it interesting that Elena is getting a taste of what the soldiers have to face. Great job.
Yes, I wanted her to do more than just work in the shop and thought it would be good for her to see how it's really going instead of the images of smiling soldiers being happy to serve like the images that were shown in the media then. Or at least I hope it's coming across like that! Thanks for reading :)
Date: 02/09/13 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 24
Yes, I'm still here and reading! Thanks for the update! hopefully more to come, soon? ;)
Thanks for sticking with it and sorry for the lack of updates recently. Next chapter is started so hopefully I'll have it posted soon :)
Date: 02/07/13 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 24
so glad you are back! I can't wait to see how this story transpires! Good thing Elena isn't going to France too cause that could be bad. Hope you have your mojo back!
Thanks Lore, I hope yours is back too so we can work on UT soon :)
Date: 09/27/12 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 23
This was cute, I liked seeing the letters Elena wrote Nick and his reaction, and hearing how it was for both people in the war and back home. It is really enjoyable.
I think the letters must've been quite romantic, but also such a huge relief to receive too. I used to listen to my grandad's war stories and used some of his experiences in this story. Glad you are enjoying and I've started a new chapter, just got to motivate myself to carry on!
Date: 09/27/12 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 18
So far I think you've done well on the war aspect of the story, it seems pretty realistic and it feels as though I'm watching a movie. I love the descriptions as well.
Thanks so much, that's an awesome bit of feedback as I always worry that my stuff is crap!
Date: 09/27/12 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 15
I know this is morbid but at least now she won't have to give Jeremy that bad news. Unfortunately that is one of the consequences of war. I'm glad Brian turned up safe and I liked you kept him and Kevin cousins as well.
Yeah, I had to get rid of him somehow and a lot of men did die during the war :( Just hope Elena doesn't feel guilty now!
Date: 09/27/12 11:59 am Title: Chapter 14
Damn it must have been hard for the soldiers back then. And Kevin is their captain, nice! I feel bad for Nick and Alex missing their loved ones back home but hopefully nothing really bad happens ;) I'm sure you won't make it easy for them lol
I think I'm being too easy on them in this story, I must toughen up and get my torture on, LOL. Thanks for reading :)
Date: 09/27/12 11:24 am Title: Chapter 12
The wedding sounds lovely and I'm glad Elena and Nick are working out. I'm also happy she wants to tell Jeremy in person.
Yeah, it would be awful for her to do an Emily on him. Thanks for reading :)