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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/12 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 34

Ooh this is so interesting, the boys using subliminal messages through music and TV. And the others are in on it too? This is like the only story I'm reading where Nick isn't present at all. I love it! So much info in this chapter, can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Lots of information yes, but still missing so many pieces!  Thanks for the review Tracy. I know, I can't believe I've managed to keep the blonde who likes to take over my stories out of the story for this long. LOL  Well i don't know if all the others were in on it.  Remember Kevin's mind was supposed to be erased too, he was under the impression that all the other guys were like Brian and how he was supposed to be, wiped memories. 

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/12 10:40 am Title: Chapter 33

I think Leighanne was trying to tell him because she said "Baylee's still safe".  She couldn't tell him the truth because the doctor was lurking, and possibly had the room bugged or something.

Great chapter, I hope Izzy finds him and Megan!



Author's Response:

Hrm... are you in my mind with this? you shall have to wait and see. :)  Thanks for reading and leaving a review Steph.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/12 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 33

WTF. God, Lore. No wonder you were nominated for that award because this is torture for ME lol not just the characters. Jesus. I swear they are fucking with his mind again, and he wasn't dreaming about Megan and Izzy, he is being lied to. Leighanne is lying as well. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

muhahahahahahaha torturing Brian like this is certainly fun.  Believe it or not, this chapter was planned probably a month ago before the torture awards. LOL.  But why is Leighanne lying after coming clean to him earlier? Why would she do that?  ;)  Thanks for the review Tracy!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/12 01:09 am Title: Chapter 32

Ooh Kevin knows Izzy and Brian were married. I wonder how much Kevin knows and how he plays a role in all this, what is he up to? Great chapter again, can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

yes what role indeed and can she really trust her gut and trust him?  interesting, interesting.  Thanks for the review Tracy

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/12 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 32

Now this is exciting stuff!  So Kevin isn't a bad guy after all, yay.  But what if Brian doesn't want to forget Leighanne and Baylee?  Like Kevin said, he's not going to leave them.  Could there be romance in the future for Izzy and Kevin? Hmm, that would be a twist!

Great chapter Lore!



Author's Response:

You know how Kevin likes to take over a story... lol he might just try to manuver is way into the story as a love interest! LOL.  I am going to shock you all one day and make Kevin a bad guy, yes I am! LOL... I have yet to do it though. Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/31/12 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 31

I think I'd be worried every time someone reached for something too! I wonder if that water was drugged? Seems like it was tampered with for them to just pass out like that.

Looking forward to more and hope Izzy will be reunited with them soon.



Author's Response:

I would definitely be worried every time someone reached for something if this was happening to me.  It is very possible that the water was drugged, in fact I'm just gonna come out and say it was, no point hiding that.  Though that part wasn't what I was referring to when I mentioned the filler not really filler ;)  thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/31/12 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 31

You are KILLING me, Lore. Every chapter is killing me. Now for a second I thought Megan was keeping them apart on purpose....but as soon as I read the water tasted funny, I knew they were fucked. Again, killing me. Not nice :P can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

I love your reviews Tracy! I know it is driving you crazy that just when you think you'll get answers they get separated again and then Brian gets drugged.  It's a crazy, crazy world Brian and Izzy have found themselves in.  Let's hope they can find each other and sort this all out. :)  Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/12 01:01 am Title: Chapter 30

This was very intense, I knew the men in suits were after them. And now everyone is separated.....this sucks! Sounds like they will be in even more danger now that they are not together. Hopefully Izzy finds something soon! Awesome chapter :)

Author's Response:

I hope the fight scene came off like I wanted it to... :) I had it pictured in my head but sometimes the words don't want to cooperate.  splitting them up is an evil, evil thing. What is going to happen now that they are apart? Thanks for the review Tracy. :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/12 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 29

I feel sorry for them both, Brian because he doesn't want to give up Baylee, and Izzy because she remembers their previous life and love for one another.  It's hard.

Wonder what the issue is?



Author's Response:

it's very difficult and it's the exact drama I wanted between them.  Izzy knowing and Brian refusing to let go of Baylee.  :)  Thanks for the review Steph.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/12 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 29

I so bet they are being followed on the damn train. That max guy is not a coincidence. Poor Brian not getting his memories as quick as Izzy, hope that he remembers something soon. Loved the update and looking forward to more :)

Author's Response:

Yeah Brian is a bit ticked off by that... just a bit.  We can hope he'll remember something soon.  What Max the porter? he's totally innocent I can't believe you'd think that I'd put him in there as someone following him. LOL   Thanks for the review Tracy.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/12 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 28

Aww he's jealous!  But why shouldn't she make plans, when he is planning on returning to Leighanne when it's all over.  I don't think he will though, or I hope he doesn't anyway.  Interesting that Izzy was some kind of lab rat for this special healing chemical, I wonder if there are others?

Looking forward to more :)



Author's Response:

He is jealous! LOL... so many memories/feelings rushing through I don't know how they both don't have constant headaches.  Yes, lab rat, that's what she is.... uh huh... you got me... lol.  Thanks for the review Steph.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/12 07:22 am Title: Chapter 28

I don't think Greg is as innocent as it seems, I think he's part of this whole thing somehow. I also believe they won't make the trip without trouble, like they will be found somehow. I don't think Howie is really dead either. Gahhh you're killing me here, I want more!

Author's Response:

who knows with me, he could be an innocent thrown in, he could be deadly... you just don't know until it happens. :)  Well why would I give them 2 whole days without trouble? It takes awhile for a train to get from Florida to California...that's a lot of time without a problem. LOL.  Thanks for the review Tracy.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/12 07:18 am Title: Chapter 27

Oh boy oh boy, is Howie really dead this time???? I wonder if that guy who called did it to see if they could pinpoint where they were by tracking, its all possible at this point. I also was amused at Brian flushing his phone, talk about crappy service ;) great chapter again Lore!

Author's Response:

I hope Howie is dead, they reported it on the news. Can you imagine how awkward that would be if he came back to life now?  You and Steph and the guy callng to pinpoint... can't he just be interested in getting to know Izzy better??  Geesh...  Yeah the phone in the toilet, totally a panic moment for him but I'm glad it was humorous too. :)  Thanks for the review Tracy.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/12 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 27

I wonder what's causing Izzy to heal faster, but not Brian? I don't trust Greg either, I'm thinking he maybe called to track her phone. But I'm glad the pastor managed to sort a way out for them now that they're fugitives. 



Author's Response:

Hrm, good question, why does Izzy heal faster?  Hrm I think I know the answer to that one ;)  lol.  what why don't you trust a guy she was set up with?  LOL.... we shall see what happens next. Thanks for the review Steph.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/03/12 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 26

I had a feeling Howie hadn't really left the house, or would be waiting outside for them.  I wonder if he's dead this time though? I had to laugh at Brian throwing a cushion at Howie.

Looking forward to more :)



Author's Response:

Of course Howie couldn't be gone, where would the fun in that be?  pshaw like I would make anything easy for the characters.  Brian throwing the pillow was pretty funny, but it worked he moved away from Izzy.  Thanks fo rthe review Steph.