Date: 04/18/12 03:30 am Title: Maxine
this is a great chapter i hope carlos gets hurt haha
Date: 04/17/12 08:36 pm Title: My Win
Great chapter Erika, although I'd like to see Max shove that bat up his arse!! What a bastard, but hopefully he'll get what he deserves eventually.
Date: 04/17/12 07:05 pm Title: My Win
Carlos is a no good, lying, two faced, worthless, nasty, smelly, needs to be castrated, ugly, backstabbing piece of shit. Oh I so hope he pays bit time. Like have Max win the fight & people be mad at Calos because he lost them money then they skin him alive & drown his nasty ass in the ocean like he did Turbo. Excellent work & I can't wait to read the end.
Marguerite
love you sister wife
Date: 04/17/12 06:43 pm Title: My Win
They need to kill Carlos already or do something to shut him down and get him the hell away from them all cause this is craziness!
Date: 04/17/12 05:20 pm Title: My Win
Oye vey. How the fuck does Carlos get free reign of the arenas? They need to get rid of his fucking ass. He's pissing me off even more. He's lucky I haven't skewered him yet for killing poor Turbo!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 04/17/12 03:45 pm Title: My Win
oh man. Carlos... ! I want to know the outcome, I want to know what they are going to do to get rid of him. I can't wait to see how you end this (I know you can't wait to see how it ends too lol) :)
Date: 04/14/12 09:12 pm Title: Little Locket
Oh no, just when things are looking a little more positive, that arsehole has to show up :( I hope Nick blows his brains up, or something!
Great couple of chapters Erika :)
Date: 04/13/12 04:29 pm Title: Little Locket
Ow nooooo....don't hurt her. Where is Nick?!
Date: 04/12/12 06:07 pm Title: Sunday...Funday
your story so far is awsome
Date: 04/12/12 05:28 pm Title: Little Locket
whats the plan? I want to know! I hate Carlos in case I haven't said it enough! EEeek! update soon!!
Date: 04/12/12 03:34 pm Title: Little Locket
oh god Carlos is an assssssshoooooooole. I want him gone. can't wait to see how you get rid of him, I hope the plan will still work. grrrrrr.
Date: 04/12/12 03:28 am Title: Little Locket
Aww poor Max. That had to be hard to hear about Turbo. I would be livid and draw blood. Smart men made a plan but douchefuck Carlos had to ruin it. Twatfaced bastard. Excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 04/12/12 03:25 am Title: The Plan
Poor Nick & Aj trying to come up with a way to get rid of Carlos. I would gladly do it. I'll skin the murdering bastard. Great job.
Marguerite
Date: 04/12/12 03:24 am Title: Little Locket
What the FUCK is Carlos doing in her fucking room??? And why the fuck does he get free reign around these fucking arenas?!?!?! Why the FUCK did they not get him fucknig arrested for all the shit he's done??? I am royally fucking PISSED OFF. *waves my pointy sticks angrily* BACk. THE. FUCK. OFF.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 04/12/12 03:07 am Title: Good Friend
WHY THAT MOTHERFUCKING, SLIMY, MURDERING, WORTHLESS, NO GOOD, SMELLY, EVIL DOG KILLING BASTARD. AND HIS TWO GOONS. THEY DESERVED TO BE BOILED ALIVE OR SKINNED & DIPPED IN THE OCEAN. NO ONE KILLS A POOR DOG ON MY WATCH!!! GREAT JOB THOUGH.
Marguerite
