Date: 04/12/12 03:05 am Title: Two Weeks
Oh shit Carlos waiting in his house cannot be good. I mean the man is a murderer & a slimetwat. Please tell me he dies. Excellent work as always. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Marguerite
Date: 04/12/12 02:44 am Title: Goodbye
Carlos really needs to die. Painfully. Poor Max you could feel the pain she is in. I really hope things turn out well.
Marguerite
Date: 04/12/12 02:40 am Title: Consequences
GO NICK!! However I have a feeling this decision will come back to haunt him. Please post more.
Marguerite
Date: 04/12/12 02:27 am Title: Little Locket
I am glad Nick finally showed up and told Max about Turbo and I hope it's the thing she needs to beat the crap out of Carlos cause if not I am afraid this is not gonna end well,Great Chapter!Can't wait for more!
Date: 04/12/12 02:13 am Title: Little Locket
I hope she beats him to death! Just goes crazy apeshit on his ass!! Go Max!! Do it! Do it!! Do it!!!
Can't WAIT to see how this turns out!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04/08/12 10:15 am Title: The Plan
So much happening....ooww update! :P
Date: 04/07/12 02:31 am Title: The Plan
love that they are such good friends
Date: 04/07/12 01:09 am Title: The Plan
I am still so pissed off that Carlos kiled Turbo for no good fucking reason. I can't wait for the fucking Bastard to go DOWN!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 04/06/12 08:49 pm Title: The Plan
I love this story!It's great!So much craziness going on and in the middle of it all there is this relationship,Or whatever it is with Nick and Max and I hope that they will end up together, safe and happy in the end but I am afraid that isnt how this will turn out with Carlos on the war path.Anxiously waiting for the next chapter!Great Job!
Date: 04/06/12 08:22 pm Title: The Plan
He killed the dog and another man...KILL THE BASTARD! Eye for an eye! :p
I can't wait to see what he figures out to do and how things go with Max since she now thinks he's not coming...and when she finds out what's REALLY going on.
Date: 04/06/12 08:16 pm Title: The Plan
ugh I hope they figure something out that gets rid of Carlos but doesn't put Nick behind bars! yuck!
Author's Response:
Lore I'm having a hard time with this ending. Wait...I have a hard time with all my endings. Crap! Yeah, I gotta figure out something without sending Nick away. *bites nails* Thank you Lore!
Date: 04/05/12 05:47 pm Title: Good Friend
whyyyyyyy =( poor turbo you make me cry too
Author's Response:
Awe! I'm sorry *hands you tissue* It was a very hard choice to make...thank you girlie!
Date: 04/04/12 08:34 pm Title: Good Friend
OMG you really want to make me cry!!! Lord poor Turbo... Carlos needs to die!!
Author's Response:
Carlos just might die! I'ts just not that easy to kill someone like him. I felt so bad for Turbo too :( Thank you babe.
Date: 04/04/12 07:13 pm Title: Good Friend
Oh god Erika, that was soooo sad, poor Turbo :( Carlos needs a good beating, no...more than a beating...someone should slowly kill him! The bastard!
Can't wait for more, so exciting!
Author's Response:
Ugh...it was really hard to write and I did feel bad about it. I just thought it was something I had to do. Carlos will get what's coming to him. Thank you Steph!
Date: 04/04/12 07:05 pm Title: Two Weeks
Oh god no, I hope Carlos doesn't hurt Turbo :(
