Date: 02/09/12 04:32 am Title: Chapter 5
Hahaha that was too funny! Tori is so nervous around Alex. Does she even realize that he is digging her? Hello!
He...she was all up on him. lol. Good job babe!
Author's Response: lol... right hello!!! Tori. thanks babe... for help too :)
Date: 02/08/12 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
great job. she's so cute how nervous she is. hope to see more of the just the twoo of them.
Author's Response: Thanks Krystle and I got your message thanks. I just have been kinda in a loop soon I hope to be back on track so we can get together and work on that collab! :) sorry I've been lacking but its been one crazy year and this one has started crazy too! thanks for reading this!
Date: 02/08/12 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love that she told him to stay on his side and she's the one that took over his space.. heehee. I hope the boys are being nice to Alex!
Author's Response: Haha I know she's the one all over him. Lets hope the guys are being nice to Alex! thanks Lore.
Date: 02/08/12 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh this just keeps getting better. Them sleeping together was great. And his reaction to her in the dress made me smile. Yeah he does like her. Now for her to realize it and do something about it. I mean come on sleeping next to him & not doing something about it?? Un NO! Keep up the fantastic work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: You're right I think Tori is just a little blind at the moment we'll see how it all unfolds. lol thanks mar for reading.
Date: 02/04/12 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh no! Alex watch your back they might use you as bait. Hmm...sharing a basement sounds interesting. what a friend I am...I coulda sworn I had reviewed.
Author's Response: A bad friend!!! lol jk thanks for helping me as always :)
Date: 01/31/12 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
I already looking forward to hear more about the basement scenes haha or the fishing trip :P
Author's Response: Haha the basement scene will be very interesting lol. Now for the fishing trip we'll see!!
Date: 01/31/12 10:51 am Title: Chapter 4
Ok so Howie isn't the scumbag ex. I just hope Alex survives the fishing trip. And they have to sleep together in the basement. Gota love family.'
MArguerite
Author's Response: Yeah Howie has it for her poor Howie can't be seen as more than a friend. lol then there's this fishing trip too... hmmm haha thanks mar for reading glad your liking this! :)
Date: 01/31/12 10:47 am Title: Chapter 3
Jackie is right Alex does like her. And I bet Howie is her scumbag ex. I can already tell that I don't like her sister. Please update soon.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Haha poor Howie... I think Alex likes her too... we'll see. thanks mar.
Date: 01/31/12 10:38 am Title: Chapter 2
Awww. He sounds like a sweetheart. Now I would open a cupcake shop if I could get more customers like him. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Right me too... Lets open this cupcake shop! lol thanks mar!
Date: 01/31/12 10:32 am Title: Chapter 1 - Favor
I like this. She had the courage to ask him. Somehow I think/hope it will turn into more. Great start. I can't wait to read more.
Marguerite
Author's Response: woohoo you're reading my story!! Thanks Mar hope you continue to like it!
Date: 01/31/12 05:56 am Title: Chapter 4
ah Howie has a thing for her! That will lead to some interesting drama later I'm sure. I can't wait to see this "fishing" trip. Will it be like Fools Rush In when they take him hunting rattlesnakes? LOL....
Author's Response: Lord I remember that scene from Fools Rush In!! LOL Hmm we'll see how the fishing trip goes.
Date: 01/31/12 03:21 am Title: Chapter 4
am sooooooo into see Howie more that just a friend ; )
Author's Response: LOL seriously Howie is a good choice. hehe we'll see.
Date: 01/31/12 03:20 am Title: Chapter 4
Things are about to get intereting with the fam. Hope they don't give him too much of a hard time.
Author's Response: I hope they don't...hehe thanks Krystle. I still haven't forgotten about the other collab but I've had a hectic schedule but hopefully soon. :)
Date: 01/26/12 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
hahahah oohh alex!! what did you get into it???
Author's Response: I know lets see how the family treats poor ol' Alex. :) thanks for reading.
Date: 01/26/12 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm thinking that Alex is not having a hard time with this because he does like her and wants this too! And Tori is only having issues because she likes him too... Gah meeting parents is nerve wracking, though so is meeting siblings.
Author's Response: It think it was just the shock, but you might be right he might actually really like it. hehe thanks for the review lore.
