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Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/12 06:29 am Title: Daddy's Ear

Awww this one was so sweet. I like how you showed each POV again in this one and the way you transitioned from Boy to Boy. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks, Rose! :O)

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/12 05:09 am Title: Daddy's Ear

I am sure it is hard on all of them being away from their families,Wives, Girlfriends or whatever,I think it is especially hard for say,A.J. considering Rochelle is pregnant,And it can't be easy having been overseas and away from her even if it was for just a short time.But also for Brian,Howie and Kevin who already have kids.Not that it's any easier for Nick because he doesn't have kids,I am sure he misses Lauren like crazy when he is away from her.I don't know about the rest of the fans out there but I am one who thinks that Lauren has been kind of a calming influence on Nick,She seems to have grounded him and changed him in some pretty major and I think,good ways.Not that it was all her who did that,I think Nick did alot of that on his own,But I think she guided him in that direction.Anyway,Great Job!This chapter was sweet!

Author's Response:

Aww I didn't see this review until just now! Sorry I didn't respond right away. I agree about AJ. I do think being away was probably hardest on him and I also do agree with you about Lauren. I'm not really all that into their personal life when it comes ot their wives etc... I tend to leave them out of my stories but it seems like she's been great for him. I mean, who knows for absolute sure? But he seems to be happy and she hasn't given me any reason to not like her, so...I approve lol Thanks!!

Reviewer: Just Marina Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/12 04:15 am Title: Daddy's Ear

Aww the do re mi song scene from the video, lovely! Great chapter. I like that every boy has a part because it goes perfectly with the scene itself, one of those moments when you want to know what they all are thinking.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Maria! :-) 

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/12 07:28 pm Title: Daddy's Ear

Aw poor boys, I bet being away from their families for a few weeks is hard, but at least they can talk to them and see them on the computer.

I loved that video AJ took of them playing that song, it was great and made a change from his pointless bomb videos, lol.

Just like you're sad that the boys have gone back, I'll be sad when this comes to an end.



Author's Response:

Yes, this is the one time that AJ got it right! LOL too bad he didn't do stuff like that the entire three weeks, right? Aww that was sweet! I would love to keep going and going but they need to give me more stuff to write as it is i'm starting to blend a lot more fiction with the reality of what was happening to begin with. Thanks, Steph! :O)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/12 04:24 am Title: Daddy's Ear

Lmao. I love how they're jamming to Do Re Me.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response:

Thanks, Lenni! :-)

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/12 03:06 am Title: Daddy's Ear

Aww, this one was so sweet! I love how you seamlessly transitioned from one scene/POV to the next and integrated them all with the theme of homesickness. Poor guys, missing their women and their boys! I also liked the references to your earlier one-shots, like the purple couch and Brian making coffee. I love how you used the Do-Re-Mi scene in the end. Brilliant, Mare!

Author's Response:

I was originally just going to make this a Nick story but it felt more like a group one. I enjoy bringing in other elements from other stories to try to blend it together. Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks, Julie! 

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/12 12:42 am Title: Daddy's Ear

Awww I really liked this one! I liked how you did the transitions between their scenes, it had a very Why I'd Do It All Again feeling to it. I also really liked Nick comment about how he used to get jealous when the guys would say they missed their families because he felt he was their family. Awww Nick. I'm sure he really did used to feel that way. You're so good at channeling the boys! I'm beginning to suspect that you were actually in London with them :P Keep up the great work as always!

Author's Response:

I really can see him being jealous of the guys and their families. Aww, what a great compliment. I wish I was in London. If I was there, I would have never let them leave lol thanks, Steph! 

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/12 12:40 am Title: Daddy's Ear

Awwww. Poor homesick boys. I really love the way each section traded off with the next guy. I also liked that you tied in that do re mi video in with this, Howie's son obsessed over The Sound Of Music (not gonna lie I hate that movie). All in all very cute update :)

Author's Response:

You hate the Sound if Music? Were you born without a soul? Judt kidding lol it's actually not one of my favorites either. Glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks, Tracy!