Date: 09/22/14 01:16 am Title: § Message #15§
Love the story so far its so sad...but I still love it
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! =)
Yes, it's a sad story but there's gonna be some light at the end. Well, sort of. lol
Date: 09/19/14 11:04 am Title: § Message #15§
What I really like is how you are playing with visuals. How they are mirroring the characters emotions or not.
Feeling so bad for Bri, just wanna hug him. You did a great job portraying mourning, and how Brians world is falling apart. I'm really curious, where this will end.
I can imagine that not feeling a thing like Brian there is even worse, than actually being able to be sad. That numbness he is feeling, I think you done that right. If you loose a person that was everything for you that is probably exactly how you would feel. And I can totally understand how he is feeling there.
I wouldn't want to move on either.
Thank you for writing this :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! :)
When I was translating it, I felt so bad for Brian. Giving how much he loves, how much he really lives for the person he lives, losing his other half would be devastating. I don't think it's something you ever get over it easily and I fear there is still more darkness waiting for Brian. Oops? lol nope, I'm not sorry. lol