Reviewer: ArynjaT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/14 10:33 pm Title: § Message #18 §

I feel like I'm repeating myself, but I just again and again notice how great you are in creating atmosphere and tension.

This chapter is very sad and the raging storm and rain kinda links it to the very first chapter. I don't know if you did this with intention, but that is what came to my mind.

And you again left this quite literally on a cliffhanger!!! :O...

Author's Response: I think that now it's pretty much known that I love cliffhangers. lol Yes, it was that the intention, kinda wanting to link what happened to Nick with what Brian was trying to do. Thank you for reading. =) I love your comments! *__*