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Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/13 04:45 am Title: Chapter 28

Soooo Happy to see an update to this story!I loved the description of the condition that Brian was in when they walked through the door lol.I think there is way too much that Macie has to deal with before she can handle any kind of anything with Nick but I also think that there is something there between them...At least I hope there will be lol...Oh and BTW the fact that you have so much going on in your life,And still find time to write amazes me!I am glad you are not giving up on this story!It's soooo good!I love it!Anyway,Great Job!Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: KimberlyCan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/13 01:17 am Title: Chapter 28

Hey, so glad to read an update, keep them coming! So funny with the kids reaction to the smells and Baylee's comment about Nick never making a girl smell that way before.

Can't wait to read more of where this story is going.

Side note, just so you know you wrote Parker's name as Peyton a few times in the chapter. Thought you might want to know.

Author's Response: Ugh thanks! I reverted back to Coaster world! Lol :)

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/13 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 28

So glad you came back, I was missing Midge! I love the kids being disgusted by the smell. I hope she's packing to move in with Nick!

Author's Response: You know it smells bad when the kids are grossed out!

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/13 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 28

oooh I was wondering when I'd see an update! Poor girl! I'd be getting the heck out of there too if my hubby had gone over to the kinky side!

Author's Response: Lol but where could she go? :)

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/13 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 28

Way to leave an impression, Nick! I was so excited to see an update for this one! I totally understand what you mean about writing being your "therapeutic escape." Glad to see you found some time for yourself!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to be back while I can!

Reviewer: JordansLady Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/13 06:04 am Title: Chapter 27

OMG wow he husband is throwing surprises left and right..can't wait for more

Author's Response: Oh, Charlie is quite a character...:)

Reviewer: Kaos_Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/13 12:37 am Title: Chapter 27

WOW!!!! i am sooo ready for another update! i dont even know where to begin.. i read this the other day the last two chapters updated at work and couldn't really pay the best attention and it wouldn't let me review so here i am today .. re readinga and reviewing... HOLY COW! i like that brian is helping out with the kids above all he is a great friend to Nick... i love that she knows ..that he's got this! haha and that she is soo overwhelmed by his hand on her mouth.. and has decided she may not like hoodies anymore because of not being able to see his face.. haha dog the bounty hunter.. yeah dog the bounty hunter wish he looked like nick carter! you are bringing out all kinds of characters in these chapters..he already calls her midge like lady and the tramp..now he is spider man and them dressed like dog the bounty hunter and his wife.. this im quite literally picturing and its got me cracking up inside.. but back to more serious things like holy cow..she prolly should've stayed in the car only i agree with her i couldn't have stayed either..love that she heard nick muttering and griping about falling for her...those two are going to be amazing together once they just let it happen.. i gotta say i was totally posiitive the whole time that the nurse had something to do with charlie and his strange behavior but i sure never thought that it would be that he wore women's clothing and he ws the female in a relationship with a man who had fake boobs... wow! i hate that she had to see it.. i hate that it hurt her but i am totally glad he is going to be out of the picture for nick to be there.. loving that she notices that nick is taking care of her more than charlie has and that she is happy about it.. poor girl i can't imagine what she must be thinking in her mind.. dont get me wrong i think she has already fallen for nick and she wouldn't do anything to screw up her marriage because she is a good woman and mother and she has morals and values and i dont think nick would have let her because he loves her and he would never let her stoop to that level but even if you were falling for another man im sure the fact that your husband dresses up in women's underwear and cheats on your with another man that dresses up as a woman probably would hurt you and make you sick ..personally im not sure where the appeal is in that .. to each their own but i dont understand if the two men are intereseted in men and not women..then why dress like women? anyways thank god he caught her i can't wait to see what happens next .. im so ready for those two to be together but i get it will take time for it all to come together correctly because of everything she is going through.. but oh i have so many questions.. will she bust him out? will she make him leave the house? will she leave the house? if she leaves the house will she live with nick? and i love that rielynn is soooo very easily taken with nick i bet she feels closer to himthat she ever has her own dad.. wouldn't suprise me at all if she never really noticed a difference when her mom and dad separate since well nick spends far more time with them than charlie has ever.. update soon! can't wait amazing two chapters cant wait for more

 



Author's Response: Sorry it's taken me so long to update! Midge's life isn't boring or normal. She has a lot of decisions to make now. But she might have a little help :)

Reviewer: Rosalie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/13 03:52 am Title: Chapter 1

So happy you updated again poor girl...she has been through so much lately. Hopefully, things between her Nick start to happen soon, so she can restore her faith in relationships!! Update soon can't wait to see what other adventures they go on together ;)

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/13 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 27

omg what a mess haha....love it though!

Author's Response: TFTR!

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/13 02:48 am Title: Chapter 27

omg this is too much! LOL I feel bad for 'Midge' (brain fart from drooling over the Boys in St. Louis this weekend, can't remember her actual name) looking forward to how she'll deal with this new twist when her hubby gets home!



Author's Response: That is, if she waits for her hubby to get home!

Reviewer: Rainbowbrite006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/13 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 27

I'm glad they are both ok! I love the last line. lol

Author's Response: <3

Reviewer: Rainbowbrite006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/13 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 26

I laughed with the dog the bounty hunter line. I just love this story. :)

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/13 02:03 am Title: Chapter 27

Wow!I mean...Wow!This whole Charlie situation just keeps getting weirder and weirder lol.I knew that fire escape wasn't gonna hold them and I am glad that they landed in the dumpster,As gross as that sounds,Especially with the puke but at least they aren't dead lol.I really hope that Macie finally has all the proof she needs to leave Charlie.Anyway,Great Chapter!Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Nick in a dumpster would still be sexy..how sad is that??

Reviewer: Tweetersweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/13 01:41 am Title: Chapter 27

Awwwwww and Ewwwww lol! 



Author's Response: Always good writing when you can get both responses at once! Aww and ewes!

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/13 01:30 am Title: Chapter 27

Gross! Can't believe she was a guy. Thank God Nick saved her!



Author's Response: Nick to the rescue!