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Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/13 01:30 am Title: Chapter 9

This is not going to end well.I think Charlie is kind of a jerk for not taking 3 seconds to listen to what Macie had to say but I also think agreeing to go with Nick before she has a chance to talk to Charlie about it is a bad idea.Especially when she's taking Rielynn with her.I mean,It's not like she's just taking her on some little day trip out of town,They are going out of the country.Anyway,Great Chapter!Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: It's called being stuck between a rock and a hard place, but I agree...Charlie should know. Or maybe he shouldn't...#drama??? LoL Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/13 01:05 am Title: Chapter 9

Terrific chapters! Looking forward to more!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/13 01:02 am Title: Chapter 8

She needs to go and enjoy herself. The bug part was perfect!



Author's Response: Ugh bugs :shudders: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/13 12:53 am Title: Chapter 6

They have great chemistry!



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/13 12:14 am Title: Chapter 5

Terrific chapter! It's great to see them interact with each other and their kids!



Author's Response: There's never a dull moment with little ones around!

Reviewer: Kaos_Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/13 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 8

i was soo glad to see that you had updated! i can't wait for more.. it really sucks that their husband/wife are so wrapped up in their own little worlds that they don't have time for their relationships let alone their kids... somehow i just know these two are going to end up together it may take a while or not im not sure but i know they will.. i secretly hope that they aren't the bad guys though.. ya know.. because i do truly wonder what keeps the other two away from their families unless they have "extra curricular" activies that we dont know about yet? anyways the story is great! Cant wait to read more please update soon!

 



Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the updates! I hope you'll enjoy how this all plays out :)

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/13 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 8

I hate bugs of any kind!So if Nick,Or any person for that matter saved me from one,I would do pretty much anything they asked me to do lol.I am wondering if this is going to cause trouble with Charlie though.Anyway, Great chapter!Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'd do pretty much anything asked me to period, bugs or no bugs :). Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/13 04:37 am Title: Chapter 8

Charlie, Charlie!! If you dont pay attention to your women someone else will and take her to Kuala Lumpur, just saying, lol.



Author's Response: Lol Charlie is just providing for his family! :)

Reviewer: JordansLady Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/13 03:49 am Title: Chapter 8

lmao at the bug scene ...great chapter cant wait for the next chapter



Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/13 02:55 am Title: Chapter 8

I laughed so hard with the bug scene. Kids have no fear when it comes to those things Lol i saw a tarantula on my video game last night and it freaked me out...usually I am not bothered by bugs....but i totally understand why she reacte like that. I am glad Nick was there to calm her down, he seems like a good daddy and that is hot lol. Loving this story Jen :)

Author's Response: Ugh I'm the worst when it comes to bugs! Earwigs are my #1 ick. Worst thing ever is shaking out a beach towel to find its full of them. Thanks for the review! Hope you'll keep reading :)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/13 02:41 am Title: Chapter 7

I would have punched Highlights lol. Can't stand when girls act like that, but who can blame them lol

Author's Response: It's the Carter effect. Highly dangerous and very contagious :)

Reviewer: JennayHeartsNick Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/13 02:15 am Title: Chapter 8

Wow...I gotta say, its very ballsy of him to ask her to do that.  I figured he'd just leave Parker with her to go for just 5 days...that seems more logical.  I wonder tho, if Charlie will even give a damn...and something tells me that all his late nights are NOT working..but, I guess we shall see....



Author's Response: I have to lol because when does Nick ever use logic? :) of course there could always be a method behind his madness, but I guess we'll just wait and seeeeeeeee

Reviewer: Kaos_Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/13 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 7

Totally loving this story somehow I have a feeling they end up together! Or somethjng. Of that sorts! Can't wait to read!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you're enjoying it :)

Reviewer: Rosalie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/13 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love it :) I just caught up. It's very original please update soon 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Hope you enjoy the updates!

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/13 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 7

Hmm....chomping at the bit here to ifnd out what that favor is.  Also have to say that I love how you always throw in some silly humor.  I lol'd at the "sing! sing!"/"Old Macdonald" bit.



Author's Response: Lol Nick and silly humor is just such an easy combination. It should be against the law for someone to be that good looking and funny :)