Date: 09/10/13 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
Well hello, does he want her to fall down the roof in shock? I didn't see that one coming! I'm off to the next chapter to see if she did. ;)
Author's Response: Haha! Her falling off the roof would have been quite the plot twist early on, wouldn't it?
Date: 09/10/13 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hello! I was just on the AC-board and saw that your story is this month's featured one, so here I am reading and reviewing!
Like the first chapter, especially the first half is very intriguing!
Author's Response: Hi! It's great to see a new reader, especially as a result of the "featured story"! I hope you continue to like it!
Date: 09/07/13 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 13
His father? omg what?!
Author's Response: And why?? lol. Thanks Paula!
Date: 09/07/13 03:27 am Title: Chapter 13
I love Kevin! He should have been Nick's lawyer! To answer your question about Jordan Keller. I spent much too long with him and Leighanne and developed an intense dislike for both at a charity event. Let's just say they are real douchey when the cameras aren't on and they think no one is looking and leave it at that! I'm glad Nick was finally absolved! Bob seems to make more sense in a killy, stabby kind of way. Maybe he was having an affair with Annie's mom and got jealous so he killed them. Have fun on vacation!
Author's Response: Again, I like your theories. Already interested in your response ti the next chapter, though I may not be able to post it for a while. We'll have to see his packing goes. Thanks!
Date: 09/06/13 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 13
REALLY?!?! I was not expecting that!
Enjoy your vacation!
Author's Response: Well, there might be more to it than what you're thinking... Thanks!
Date: 08/30/13 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 12
I'm glad Annie didn't go there and start accusing Nick, but wanted to hear him out. I think she believes him. Now we just have to see what the final lab report says and see what can be done!
Great chapter Emily, very exciting :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Steph! I plan to get the final lab report out in the next chapter!
Date: 08/30/13 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 12
Yikes! I still can't believe this Kendal guy. He's so quick to be Mr. Arresty arresterson but them lets Annie be violent with him and doesn't do anything to her at all. No charges, no "Hrmm she's got a violent streak and she seems to be overly protective of this suspect. Maybe she should be one too? Maybe she hired him to kill the parents." Nope, just an eh, I kind of expected that! What an idiot! And OMG Nick!! Not Jordan! Call someone who has experience and isn't a giant douche! You are being framed for murder not misspelling your name in a will!!!
I hope this gets resolved soon and Nick is no longer a suspect so we can get to the suspense part of this. I want to see who this mystery person is and I'm hoping it's not an evil twin of Nick's we have never met. Although an evil twin sometimes comes in handy.
^ Just thought you'd like my reactions to reading this chapter this morning at 5:30 lol
Writing wise, comment. I love the flow of this story so far if that makes sense? It's just kind of flowing really well from one scene to another. And I loved the little bit about AJ believing Nick was framed. That was cute. Throwing that in there and in turn all the boys were represented in one way ot another. I want Kevin and Howie to show up and start trying to make sense of what's happening. I do this often, but haven't for awhile because he hasn't been around :O( but when things get out of hand I yell Kevin's name. So, KEVIN!!! Let's go buddy!! Time to step in and save the day. Great chapter! :O)
Author's Response: Wow, Mare! I saw this review first on my phone, and it took up the whole screen! Hmm...I honestly didn't even think about Kendall suspecting Annie after her little outburst. It was supposed to be more of a reflection of how deeply Annie cares for Nick and that she's not just going to sit around and not fight it when he gets arrested (and what an idiot she thinks Kendall is). Good point. And is Jordan a douche? I honestly don't know a single thing about him-- just remember reading his name on the credits on the back of the album, so I went with it. Oh, and Kevin and Howie show up in the next chapter!
Date: 08/29/13 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 11
But he can't have done it, can he? I'm wondering how the skin cells got there. Creepy!
Very interesting couple of chapters, can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Steph! The explanation is coming up very soon!
Date: 08/25/13 10:00 am Title: Chapter 11
I think Aunt Allie is involved. Poor Nick... Even if I had nothing to hide, I'd be a nervous wreck in that situation! The list of aliases was a good idea to make him seem more suspicious to the cops. I'm glad Annie thinks the whole thing is ridiculous. Can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response: Thanks again! I like reading your theories. I hope this all makes sense in the end!
Date: 08/25/13 09:58 am Title: Chapter 10
What?! This is crazy! I don't believe Nick had anything to do with the murder, but I am wondering how his DNA could have gotten underneath Mrs. Donohue's fingernails. Maybe he was framed. I liked the scenes with the police detective. Normally I don't particularly care to read about minor characters who aren't Backstreet Boys, but in this case it was interesting to see what was going on behind the scenes as the case was being built against Nick. I wonder how Annie will react when she finds out he's been arrested!
Author's Response: Thanks Julie! I felt like I needed to delve a little deeper into the detector because he's going to be there through the whole story. And yes, ti build the case against Nick. I'm excited about Annie's next big scene, so I hope you like it (not the next chapter of Brian telling her, but what she's going to do next). Glad you seem to have had a good first week of school!
Date: 08/25/13 09:53 am Title: Chapter 10
What?! This is crazy! I don't believe Nick had anything to do with the murder, but I am wondering how his DNA could have gotten underneath Mrs. Donohue's fingernails. Maybe he was framed. I liked the scenes with the police detective. Normally I don't particularly care to read about minor characters who aren't Backstreet Boys, but in this case it was interesting to see what was going on behind the scenes as the case was being built against Nick. I wonder how Annie will react when she finds out he's been arrested!
Date: 08/25/13 08:10 am Title: Chapter 11
Nick you numb nuts, you should always have a lawyer present. I can't believe Brian didn't think to go with Nick and make sure he grabbed a lawyer. This is why we need Howie. HOWIE where are you? LOL
Author's Response: Hahaha! I love this review.
Date: 08/23/13 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 10
Whaaaat? No he is wrong!
Author's Response: Maybe? :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/22/13 03:59 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh my! You know who else has blonde hair? Leighanne! Just sayin' lol
I still don't understand how Nick can possibly be a suspect if he was with the boys when the murder happened, unless I'm missing something? I'm sure you'll explain all that eventually. I'm just impatient.
I hate when people are framed for things it makes me nuts! Obviously Leighanne and Annie are secret lovers and decided the best way to get Nick out of the picture is to frame him for her parents murder so they hired their homicidal Brian from "One Phone Call" to take care of things! NAILED IT!!
Sorry, I had to... but seriously, nicely done. I like how you write your coppers! LOL
Just letting you know, now that school is starting up, I might not always get a chance to read on the day you update. But it doesn't mean I don't love you though lol
Author's Response: Oh! I had forgotten about homicidal "One Phone Call" Brian! He IS blonde, too... And yes, more explanation in the next chapter, actually. Good to know that you still love me! LOL
Date: 08/22/13 03:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Good story thus far!
Kendall is a little to quick to find the killer. Any good detective would of realized that a major pop star would have poeple that could witness him in LA at the time of the murder.
Does Andrew have a brother? I couldn't recall if you mentioned one in the other story.
Well you have me hooked. Can't wait to find out what and who this ghost is.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's great to see a review from someone new! Yes, Kendall has a lot to learn, but more details on that in the next chapter! And, no, there was no brother for Andrew mentioned in the previous story. Glad to see that you're hooked!
