OMG, Mare, I love this so far!!! What a delightfully disturbing start! At first I thought you meant Tim as in Kevin's brother LOL, but quickly I realized that was not the case! (At least, I don't THINK it is LOL.) I love how you started with a chapter centered on him, instead of one of the Boys - usually I don't like that, but in this case, it worked out perfectly. You did a great job revealing the details slowly until we had a clear picture of just what kind of person Tim is. This was honestly very creepy, and I mean that as a huge compliment! I can't wait to read more and find out who is who. Now that we know the shorter one is Howie, I'm picturing the bigger one as Nick, just cause I like them paired together, but it could be Kevin, and I'm wondering which two are trapped and who is broken by the side of the road. I'm so excited to find out!

Author's Response:

First of all, CRAP! I totally forgot that Kevin's brother's name was Tim! LMAO I borrowed Tim from FNL because I knew I'd remember his name that way and we all know how bad I am with remembering names! Although think of what a warped twist that would be if I did make it Tim Richardson, I mean they are in the woods somewhere! I was honestly worried about starting it the way I did. I was and still am kind of afriad, people won't want to continue reading or half read and think it's about this random guy before they get to the other two, but it had to start with Tim. I don't think it would have worked any other way because of the way I wanted to slowly reveal who was who! Thanks so much, Julie especially for saying it waa creepy that's exactly the word I was hoping to hear from people when it came to him! I'm glad to know you really enjoyed it! YAY! :O)

Wow! Can't wait to see where this is going to go!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! :O)