Date: 08/28/13 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
Now, I understand this chapter. I really thought the last parts of the chapter were from the van's scene. lol. I'm glad Howie escaped, but poor Timmy he lost one friend. lol. Go, Howie! Find the other three... :)
Author's Response: okay, good! Glad you got it the second time through! Yes Tim will not be happy. lol Thanks, Ritz!
Date: 08/11/13 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love that Howie kept pushing himself till he got loose and to hear the guys act like brothers. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
It's always fun to put Howie into a hero role. He usually gets totally ignored! LOL Poor Howie! Thanks, Kyrie!
Date: 08/10/13 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
I found myself holding my breath as Hwie was trying to free himself lol
Author's Response:
Yay! That's always great to hear!
Date: 08/09/13 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yay, Howie managed to free himself, but I'm sure he won't get very far! I'm thinking that Kevin must be the one who was with him, I just hope Nick and Brian are OK in the van.
Author's Response:
Aww yes, Howie was pretty handy! As for the rest, you'll have to see! Thanks, Steph!
Date: 08/09/13 07:54 am Title: Chapter 2
Hey Mare, I'm so glad u are writing again! I was hoping that Kevin's return would spark some inspiration. U write the best bromance, especially between Kevin/Nick (my fav pair)
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Kim! Yup, that boy did it for me! I have missed those two together! Obviously they are my favorite pair too! There shall be some Kevin/Nick love in this one! Glad you're enjoying it and thanks for the review! :O)
Date: 08/09/13 07:21 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh... I love it! I love how Howie described what happened while trying to free himself.
And, of course, I loved Brian's joke about his boyband boyfriend! LOL
Amazing job!!!
Author's Response:
I knew you would enjoy that one, Cinzia! I admit that line was written just for you! *whispers* don't tell Emily! LOL
Date: 08/09/13 04:01 am Title: Chapter 2
LOL at Brian's boyband boyfriend! I'm back with my inappropriate responses to serious chapters. Enjoy! And, seriously, ditto to what Tracy and Julie already said.
Author's Response:
Hey, that's why I throw those lines in! To give you something to comment on. LMAO Thanks, Emily!
Date: 08/09/13 03:57 am Title: Chapter 2
Another fantastic chapter! This story is so well-written; I'm loving all the description! I like how you flashed back to the accident and what lead up to it (bananas LOL), but stopped before you revealed too much about who is who. Now I'm thinking Kevin is the one with Tim, not Nick, and that Nick and Brian are the ones who are trapped. It's kind of fun to not know for sure yet. I'm glad Howie got himself free; I hope he doesn't run into Tim in the woods, but I'm guessing he will. Looking forward to more soon!
Author's Response:
I don't know why I picked bananas! It's the first thought that came into my head. LMAO I'm also glad you're enjoying the whole guessing game. I figured that would be part of the fun, trying to figure out who was where although by the end of the next chapter you'll know for sure because there comes a time when being too vague doesn't work anymore. Thanks for the compliments especially about the decription since that's what I always feel like needs the most work. :O)
Date: 08/09/13 02:33 am Title: Chapter 2
Ooh like that you revealed the story a bit more and how heroic Howie was in this chapter. Hope he finds them and doesn't get caught. Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
Howie the hero. It's about time! He needs to be in the spotlight every once in awhile although he's not really trying to find the guys, more like trying to find help in general. Thanks, Tracy! :O)
