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Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/13 11:02 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh my! that howling sound is not good. I'm glad everyone seems to be okay... for now. I'm trying to imagine the position of the van but it's no good. Why is Brian below AJ? If the van turned upside down, which explains why AJ was up on his seat. Was Brian not wearing his seat belt or something?

This is just me, Mare. Please don't think that you might not have described the scene perfectly. You know sometimes it's hard for me to understand descriptions in english. *blushes*

Author's Response: No, you have every right to be confused, and yes I'm up at 6 am on a Saturday lol *shakes head* I was just talking to Julilly about my van description woes throughout this story, the other day. I think the problem with choosing a van is because there are SO many different types. The one I'm talking about is where the seats are separated in the middle so AJ would be in one while Brian was in the other behind Kevin. He was wearing a seatbelt but he would have been directly behind the driver's side. I know there are other types of vans that have a long seat without a divider. It's not one of those. I struggled with the van every time I had to describe a different aspect of it so it's not you, Ritz! You were right to ask! I feel like that's my only epic fail in this story, I was just hoping no one would notice! :-/ LOL Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/13 04:53 am Title: Chapter 3

I love the way you kept me guessing about Kevin and Nick until the end of this chapter. You made it seem like either one of them could have been the one who went with Howie or the "broken" one who stayed behind. Now everything is finally clear. Poor Kevin - it's fun to take him out of commission like this! You did a great job showing his feelings of guilt over what happened... especially in that moment when he saw Howie holding Nick's head in his lap and thought he was dead. Wow. I loved the bromantic moment between them at the end of the chapter. No one writes Kick better than you!

Author's Response:

Thanks! It was really hard when writing this, to NOT have it just be Kevin and Nick together the entire time. YOu have no idea how many times I changed up who I wanted where in this story before I went with the pairings I did. So when Kevin and Nick are anywhere in the vinicinity of each other, I have to give them moments! LOL I was telling Tracy that it's funny in the end both of our crashes were because of Kevin and his need to feel like a control freak!

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/13 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 3

Poor Kevin! I'm glad AJ and Brian are alive even if they're stuck. I hope they stay that way!



Author's Response:

We shall see! ;O) lol I guess it depends on how well you know me!

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/13 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 3

This chapter was SO SO good! great description of their injuries and their statuses. I love the way you manage to show their relationships with each other so subtly, but so strongly at the same time-- Like the scene with Nick telling Kevin it's not his fault. I got a little choked up. I wish I could do that half as well as you do!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for saying that, Emily! I appreciate it. I added that scene with Nick and Kevin in at the very last minute so I'm glad it had the desired affect! :O)

Reviewer: Jenna Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/13 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 3

Bananas!! Only you would come up with that lol. Another great chapter can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response:

LMAO I know, right? I'm still not sure where that came from. Thanks again! I'll be updating later on today :O)

Reviewer: Sam_noelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/13 09:11 am Title: Chapter 3

YAAAAAY! Mare's Back! Are you happy to be back? 'Cause I'm happy you're back.lol Totally stoked about this story too. At first I thought it was Nick and Howie with Tim, because the way you wrote the "tall one's" reactions in the car, he sounded more like Nick. Then since Kevin got up and out of the car I thought he was going to be prisoner and Nick would be broken, but excited at how you're playing this all out. Tim is an unpredictable character and it will be interesting to see what happens with him and Nick.

Bottom line, I'm happy you're back, sorry it took so long to write a review, but I finally got a chance to sit down and type one out! Can't wait for more...

Author's Response:

I am very happy to be back and re-energized. I just hope I can keep it up. I am writing ahead of myself. I just finished chapter 8 so at least we know we have that many done. I had actually gone back and forth myself as to whether it should be Kevin or Nick. If Nick was left at the car, it would have been he and Brian stuck inside and AJ broken. In the end, I just couldn't resist having Nick be the kidnapped one. Old habits die hard I guess. LOL!

I'm so happy to see you back and reading! YAY!! :O) I'll probably be posting chapter 4 some point today!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/13 02:45 am Title: Chapter 3

Ah so it was Nick who was with Howie. I am glad none of them are hurt too badly but wow, must be scary to be in that situation. Great update Mare!

Author's Response:

Yup! Nick and Howie together. As far as people being hurt, it's still kind of early, you never know! ;O) Thanks, Tracy!

Reviewer: KimberlyCan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/13 01:11 am Title: Chapter 3

Loving the new chapter! Glad Kevin and Nick made up before separating! And glad there will be some Kevin/nick bromance moments in this story. I went to see the concert last night and got video of Nick kissing Kevin and Kevin sipping it off bc he got him on the neck.

Author's Response:

Aww! I hope you upload that. I'd love to see it! Glad you got to see that concert. Julilly was at that show as well! :O) Yup I'm actually writing a Nick and Kevin scene now! that will be showing up a few chapters down the road. :O) Thanks, Kim!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/13 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 3

I was wrong then, it was Nick who went with Howie! I love how you keep us guessing :)

Aw poor Kevin though, he must be in agony and also feeling useless right now.

I can't wait for more, loving this Mare :)



Author's Response:

LOL yup, and thanks! I figured that would be part of the fun! I know, poor Kevin :O(

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/13 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 3

Amazing chapter!

Let's see if I get them right: the two trapped are, obviously, Aj and Brian (not being able to move, that's a real torture for him LOL); Nick is now the prisoner since he's the one with Tim while Howie is the lost one. That leaves Kevin for the broken one. I'm not sure, though. You still can pull some twist. lol

Author's Response:

Yup, you're correct! Thanks, Cinzia!