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Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/17/13 10:22 am Title: Chapter 13

a Tim backstory... poor Timmy. I don't know why but the old pair of pajama being thrown away had a big impact on me. My heart broke for Tim. And I hope the reason why his mother commit suicide and left him all alone would be reveal on the next chapters. If she cannot take that kind of life anymore, why didn't she just escaped, and of course bringing Tim along with her.

I just hope no one is hurtas Nick and Tim fight. I also hope Howie is far, far away from the cabin. lol

Author's Response: I know, it's kind of heartbreaking to see what his life used to be like and how it has made him who he is today. There will be more about him to come, obviously lol

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/13 10:24 am Title: Chapter 13

I really liked this chapter and all the Tim back story that was revealed, while still moving the overall story forward. I can't help but feel sorry for Tim; you've made him a very sympathetic villain. I did laugh at the thought of him trying to build a cage for "a pet bear or deer." I'm surprise he never found a wolf, but at least now he has a pet Backstreet Boy! I knew poor Nick wasn't gonna get far with that gun; it's too early for him to shoot Tim. I wonder how far Howie is from the cabin, or if he's just been walking in circles this whole time. I'm glad I have a couple more chapters to read!

Author's Response: Thanks! And I laughed about that too! LOL Tim and his potential pet bear! I decided not to mention wolves with Tim because that's a little too much wolf potential! Thanks, Julie!

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/13 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 13

ç_ç Poor Tim. Poor little and crazy Tim. He didn't have a good life. He just wants someone to stay with him. He doesn't want to be alone. ç_ç

Nick, really. LOL

Author's Response: You almost want to hug the guy, right? He is a psycho though, we must remember he's not all that cuddly, and Nick really what? LOL Thanks, Cinzia! I've been working on a Brian chapter since last night and I keep thinking of you lol

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/13 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 13

I kind of feel sorry for Tim, but then at the same time I also think he's crazy. His upbringing definitely contributed to his craziness, who knows what kind of man he'd be if he'd had a normal life and treatment for his schizophrenia type disorder.

But that gun shot?!?! Nooooo I hope Nick isn't hurt :( What a cliffy, I'm dying to see what happens next :)

Author's Response: Yeah, it is something to think about huh? If Tim was brought up in a different environment, maybe he'd be a completely normal guy. As far as the gunshot, yikes! ~Thanks, Steph!

Reviewer: Jenna Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/13 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 13

You've finally confirmed that Tim is a psycho!! What a horrible childhood! So many emotional scars.....so sad :( What injury does Nick have to his stomach? I have too many diagnoses to go on LOL. Great chapter. Update soon please!

Author's Response: Aww I know, I feel bad for Tim even though he's a nut. At least there's a reason for his madness. As far as Nick injury probably one of the things you're thinking is correct. LOL Thanks, Carrie!

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/13 05:12 am Title: Chapter 13

As bad as I feel for Tim, Nick should have shot him.

Author's Response: You never know, he might have! ;O) Thanks, Kyrie!

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/13 05:09 am Title: Chapter 13

Of course you end it like that. Couldn't imagine it any other way. lol. Great look into Tim's psyche here. I can see how all of that happening to him at such a young age has made him stark-raving mad. And go Nick! Even if Tim does seem to somehow have you brainwashed just a little bit...

Author's Response: I have been doing good with the no real cliffies up until now, but like I told Tracy, this will be the first of a couple more or so-ish lol Yes, now we are getting why he might be a tad on the crazy side! Thanks, Emily!

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/13 04:07 am Title: Chapter 13

Sure, leave us readers with a extremely mean cliffhanger. Thanks, Mare. ;)
Great chapter though. Poor Nick, I wonder how bad his injuries are and if the bullet hit anyone. Update soon, please, so I can sleep again...

Author's Response: Sorry! Just remember at the risk of you wanting to kick me, I do skip around so this will not be resolved for a few chapters yet. LOL But I know you still love me, right? :O) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/13 02:12 am Title: Chapter 13

It was really interesting to see more about Tim and his family, he is bat shit looney but I love it. Loved that Nick tried to defend himself but the poor guy is really getting worse and worse. That last line worries me too. Damn your cliffies.

Author's Response: Aww yes, I am enjoying creating his back story so we all can see why he's so bonkers! Hey, I've been pretty good with the cliffies up until now, but they'll be coming more frequently from this point on. LOL Thanks, Tracy!