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Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/17/13 09:59 am Title: Chapter 18

I'm afraid to know the secrets Tim and his father shared in the camping ground. Poor Timmy. And I thought he had a good life before they ran away, I am just glad his mother made him feel loved. Kids don't deserve physical or emotional abuse. :(

Author's Response: You will learn those and it's not the happiest thing on earth! I agree, it's awful! Thanks for all the reviews, Ritz!

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/13 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 18

I love these Tim chapters! I was glad to get some more back story and a clue as to why they ran into the woods. It would make sense that his dad was a fugitive. I wonder what he did and if that's what the secret was that he confessed to Tim during their camping trip. I laughed so much throughout this chapter at Tim's dialogue and the things he would think, like, "He thought he’d at least wish him a happy birthday but he probably just felt bad because he didn’t get him a present or anything. “Don’t worry Howie, I didn’t expect you to get me anything!”" Sometimes I just had to read them out loud to myself and laugh so more. Tim is so delusional, he's almost loveable in a way... a crazy, twisted, frightening way! Your Best Villain win at the DRATW Awards was well deserved!

Author's Response: LMAO!! I can see you saying those lines out loud! I enjoyed writing him being so overly obsessed with his birthday. I drew from some people for that one! ;O) And thank you! :O)

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/13 01:55 am Title: Chapter 18

Ok, I started to feel bad for Tim until the last paragraph. He needs to go!

Author's Response: Aww I know, right? You want to hug him until he goes all homicidal! LOL thanks, Kyrie!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/13 01:50 am Title: Chapter 18

I was starting to feel sorry for him dealing with a psycho father but that last paragraph reminded me how nuts he is. He's gonna kill the others and basically kill nick with the aspirin. I want to smack him every time aspirin is mentioned, its probably making Nick worse :(

Great chapter as always.....I feel so bad for poor Howie too.

Author's Response: I know! On the one hand you want to feel for the guy and he is trying to help Nick but on the other hand he's planning to kill three people in cold blood and by trying to help Nick, he's really doing nothing more than slowly killing him too! LOL Oh Tim, why must you be so crazy? Thanks, Tracy!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/13 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 18

I know I always say it, but Tim really has got a split personality! I feel sorry for him with the childhood he had, that must've been awful, but you'd think he'd want to be different to his dad. I wonder what his dad told him at the campsite on his 19th birthday?

I just hope Kevin, AJ and Brian get away from the car before Tim comes back to finish them off.

Great chapter, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Hrmm that question shall be answered at one point in this story! Thanks, Steph!! :O)

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/13 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 18

Poor Tim. _ I know he's crazy, unstable and really really messed up but I have to admit that I feel for him. He just wants to be loved and have someone there with him. (Okay, it's not really right to go and kidnap people but we already stated that he isn't quite right. lol).

Mh... now, which death would be better for the other guys? Getting eaten by the wolves or killed by Tim? LOL

Author's Response: I know, he's got issues but you gotta love him in a weird, kind of distorted way. LOL Maybe some will be eaten and some will be shot. Or maybe the wolves will eat Tim and problem solved! ;O)

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/13 10:26 am Title: Chapter 18

Wow, even though I know Tim is completely nuts, that last bit sure is unexpected, and yet it is not. It sucks though. Let's hope A.J. and Brian can do something to stop him, without getting themselves or Kevin hurt. Great chapter, Mare, but how did you come up with this storyline?? Do we need to worry? ;)

Author's Response: I usually consult with the two guys I have locked in my basement before I come up with any major plot twists and turns. But other than that, I would say you don't have to worry about me! LOL :O)