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Reviewer: jess20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/14 11:02 am Title: Chapter 25

This is a good opportunity to ask something I've always wondered: what was up with the guys getting angry at Nick for doing a solo album? I always thought they were supportive of eachother's separate careers?

At this point in the story, I was convinced you'd have Kevin drink the coffee and eat the cake!

Author's Response: I wish I understood that myself. Nick's book shed some light on it, but even still I don't fully get what the problem was, especially with Brian who seemed to have the most problem with it. Hopefully it's not like that anymore but I get mad whenever I think about it, still. lol

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/13 10:51 am Title: Chapter 25

An A-rok chapter! I loved it, Mare. I almost cried with Brian as he broke down but laughed instead when they said I love yous to each other. lol. That was so cheesy, but I liked it! I love how Brian's anger and frustration brought out the side of him that he doesn't know yet. :)

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the Brian and AJ chapters. They are hard for me to write for some reason but I love pairing them together.

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/13 12:25 am Title: Chapter 25

I liked the beginning scene between Brian and AJ. It was interesting to see Brian break down in front of AJ because, as you said, it's usually the other way around. Brian tends to mask his feelings with humor rather than open up about them. I liked AJ's comic relief, talking about how Nick is a magnet for crazy people and how it's just their luck for a flat tire to turn into this horror movie situation. It's like they're living in a fanfic or something! Oh wait... LOL Well, I hope Tim doesn't find out Kevin's been lying to him and trying to trick him anytime soon! LOL Oh, Tim...

Author's Response: Wow I thought you would have stopped by now! LOL You are almost caught up! Go you!! I thought it would be interesting to do a role reversal with the two of them and I could see AJ ranting about how crazy this whole entire situation was. And yes, oh crazy Tim trying to catch Kevin in a lie!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/13 11:48 am Title: Chapter 25

The conversation between AJ and Brian was really good, I could really understand why they felt and reacted the way they did. Especially Brian trying to be the strong one and finally having a weak moment, that was realistic. Tim talking about the birthday cake really worries me, he better not offer Kevin the poisoned one. I also laughed at AJ sayng nick attracts insane people LOL. I don't know if I can wait until Friday but can't wait for a new chapter, Mare!

Author's Response: Thanks, Tracy! Nick really does attract wackadoodles but I think that's one of the reasons why we love him so much. He keeps things interesting. LOL Tim and his damn birthday cake, huh? We'll have to see how that all plays out! Sorry about the wait. I hate how real life is getting in the way of my fun fanfic filled one! :O)

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/13 03:17 am Title: Chapter 25

I'm caught up! Wait...that means I have no more to read...that's an issue. Work on that. :)

Author's Response: YAY! Well you know me and my anal self will have a new chapter for you by Friday! LOL

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/13 01:19 am Title: Chapter 25

I like seeing Brian and AJ switch places and I'm glad that Kevin is ok. I'm starting to get nervous about the poisoning idea though!

Author's Response: Aww everyone's all paranoid about the poisoning thing now. Understandable I mean ever since this adventure started how smoothly has anything Howie planned gone? lol ;O)

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/13 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 25

Omg, I didn't realize what Jennay (?) states in her review, about Kevin eating the cake instead of Tim! *shoots Mare an ugly glare* Don't you dare hurt poor Kevin even more or I'll have to show up in your story and kill Tim myself! The poor guy only just got back to the group and you're already hurting him so bad. What did he ever do to you? ;)

Author's Response: How weird! I just responded to this and it's not there! LOL I hate when that happens!! Here I go again...Now wait...Jennay said that not me, it's just speculation and as far as hurting poor Kevin? It's his fault for leaving in the first place! Of he hadn't left that entire NKOTB debacle would have never happened! He's lucky I only broke his ankle! ;O)

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/13 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 25

Great chapter, Mare!
The comment about Nick being a magnet for crazy people had me like laughing out loud. It made me think of all the fanfics where he ends up being Nicknapped, shot, stabbed, tortured or hurt in any way. What do you think that says about us writers?? ;)

Author's Response: I know! LOL he really does seem like a magnet for crazy though, just based on some fans. We are all nuts!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/13 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 25

Aw poor Brian, he's always the more optimistic one, so to see him lose it is hard. But hopefully they will find someone, and not end up at the cabin too!

And I have to love Tim's craziness, whistling away like he hasn't got a care in the world. Shame Kevin's so badly injured and can't beat him to a pulp!

Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: Shame Kevin's so badly injured and can't beat him to a pulp! LMAO I love you! That would suck if after all of that they all end up in the cabin! Thanks, Steph!

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/13 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 25

I like vulnerable Brian. You write him well.

Author's Response: Thanks, Emily!

Reviewer: JennayHeartsNick Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/13 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 25

Oh no!!! Tim's gonna feed Kevin cake when they get back!! Don't eat the cake Kev!!! Don't eat it!!!

Author's Response: LMAO!!

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/13 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 25

I'm here! lol I didn't stop reading, just hadn't a lot of time to review. :(

So, first, I've to bring back my sign #TimTeam He's really really really crazy. And that's why I love him! lol
Poor Kevin. He's really afraid because... yes, you've lied to poor Tim! I'm both afraid and curios about what Tim would do when he will find out the truth.

Second. Can I make you a little statue? Because just this morning I was saying on Twitter that I needed to read some Brian's comfort stories and what you gave me? A comfort scene! I love you. lol And it was soooo good. It's how I see Brian, always trying not to let the others see him weak because that's how people had always seen him because of his heart. *my baby*

So, great job and I'll keep reading even if sometimes I don't review.

Author's Response: I did see your tweet earlier in the day and was going to mention this scene but I didn't want you to feel like you had to read and I honestly thought you had stopped. I'm glad you liked it. I know you would have preferred Brian and Nick but I honestly think AJ and Brian have always had a unique bond as well. I do see him always trying to hide his emotions and be the strong one there for everybody. I'm glad you think I did him justice. Tim gets a lot crazier as we go on. LOL I mean total yikes crazy! So, you'll have that to look forward to. Thank for taking the time to review, Cinzia!