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Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/13 12:19 am Title: Chapter 40

Loved the ending, Mare. A small part of me wants to know what Tim said to Nick in his letter; but I really love Nick's response: “I’m not giving him the satisfaction of having the last word and I certainly am not going to be his hostage anymore.” Yeah Nick!!! I'm not really surprise by Howie's marital problems, his guilt seemed to be swallowing him up. I'm glad Nick could help him....I've been loving that SweetKaos relationship lately. (And you know that's HUGE for this Kevin/Nick girl!)I think Brian's anger was a reflection of his helplessness. However, I thought his faith would suffer more....but I guess that's where the spiritual advisor helped.

Once again, Mare, super job! You always impress me with your talent!

Pammy Whammy

Author's Response: I was originally going to have Nick read the letter but I decided that he wouldn't really want to. I love Nick and Howie's relationship as well! Actually the three of them together really makes me happy! LOL Thanks so much for all the kind words, Pammy! I appreciate it! :O)

Reviewer: Jenna Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/13 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 40

Great ending to an awesome story! I guessed some of Nick's injuries but I didn't see the damaged kidney. I was confused when I read chapter 39...I was thinking wth did I miss some chapters? LOL

I'm personally kicking myself for being 'one of those people' that read & don't review afterwards. I will now make it a point to just say things even if I can't give big details about the chapter. It does motivate the author & keeps them inspired.

Please forgive me :(

I loved the story and I love all your stories.

Author's Response: Thanks, Carrie! No need to apologize! You took the time to review every once in awhile. I knew I wanted to get to Tim's progress and I also knew it had to be at least a year later for him to show any improvement, so that's why I suddenly skipped to a year later. I could have just done it in real time but this story would have just dragged out and would have lost it's ummph! LOL I'm glad you enjoyed this one!!

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/13 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 40

Well you wrapped that up nicely with a big, pretty bow on top! There are so many stories out there that just end where the action ends, and readers are left wondering what happened to their favorite characters. I like how you delved into how each of them handled what they'd been through, and I thought it all seemed pretty true to character (except Howie and Leigh separating- that made me so sad, but yay that they got back together!). Congrats on another job well done!

Author's Response: And nobody died! I felt like this one needed that one year later update. And like I said below, I felt like I had to have at least one of their marriages suffer and it seemed like Howie would be the perfect one. I knew they would get back together though. Thanks for your constant feedback throughout as well. I see you updated Run! I am going to try to read it on Friday. I have SO much school work to do. End of quarter is coming up and I have over 500 grades to post. :O/ Didn't want you to think I was ignoring your story. Thanks again, Emily!!

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/13 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 40

I was so happy when I saw you updated, but a bit sad as well, seeing it's the final one.

I'm glad Nick made it and he'll be okay for the most part. You had me scared for a second when I read about them possibly calling it quits though.

Even though it's completely understandable, my jaw dropped when I read Howie and Leigh split. Ididn't see that coming. For some reason the way Brian and A.J. acted out, I kinda expected.

It's sad though, they lost themselves because of one night and then reconnecting, not only with themselves, but also their spouses and each other, was that hard and cost them that much.

I could say many more positive things, but then you have other things to do, lol, so I'll end this review by saying once again that you are one of the best writers I know. I really hope you'll continue writing ( fanfiction ) and maybe even start a new story soon.

Author's Response: I felt like one of them had to have their marriage suffer as a result and as much as I wanted it to be Leighanne and Brian (lol) I knew she would never leave his money...erm...I mean him, She would never leave him. I felt like Leigh and Howie would be a bit more realistic. Thanks for your constant support during this fic! You were one of the people that made me want to keep writing because I was always so curious to see what your thoughts were going to be! I hope I find inspiration for a new fic! :O)

Reviewer: BSBShania Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/13 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

Is it wrong that I laughed at the part where Brian attacked the reporter? Lol
Just want to say you done it again! I've enjoyed all your stories and always forgot to post my feedback. Can't wait until the next story makes it's debut!

Author's Response: Thanks, Shania! Glad you enjoyed it! I think the mental image of Brian attacking a reporter is kind of funny myself. LOL

Reviewer: Crazy57307 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/13 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 39

I've been following this story from the first post, but haven't reviewed either. This is an amazing fic - so different from other suspense/dramas! So anxious to see what happens to Nick.

Author's Response: I'm sensing a trend here. It's nice to know you have been reading and have enjoyed it! Thanks so much!! I tried to make this one as unique as possible. Hope you enjoy the ending and thanks for reading! :O)

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/13 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 39

Oh Mare,
I feel so bad! I've been reading but not reviewing....bad Pammy! As for Tim...I didn't want to care about him, but I did. He was a product of his environment and was essentially choiceless, except when it came to the Boys. I'm glad that he now understands what he did was wrong and is truly remorseful. I'm not surprised that it was Kevin to visit Tim...it seems like a "Kevin thing." I'm not sure I could do it if I was in his situation. I also couldn't see Howie doing it. His testimony at Tim's trial of not killing Tim was a little frightening. Definite a change to out Howie. Now Mare, did you kill our Nick again? I'm not surprised that Tim had the hardest time thinking of Nick and writing a letter to him. Nick was the one he spent more time with....and the one who "saved" him. As I have been reading this story, I keep going back to the argument of "nature vs. nurture." And here's the kicker, I'm still not sure which side created Tim.

Once again Mare, I'm awed by your prose!

Pammy Whammy

Author's Response: Thanks, Pammy. I think when something like this happens, people are bound to change as a result like Howie and Brian. Do you think I could kill Nick twice? lol I'm still not sure which one Tim falls under and I created him. He's an enigma even to me! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for dropping in and letting me know!

Reviewer: JennayHeartsNick Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/13 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 39

His last visitor? Sounds like Tim may try to commit suicide. Altho, as I sat here thinking about that, and the drastic change in him, getting better and actually being able to look back on his actions and seeing just how wrong there were, I can't help but wonder if it was easier for him to deal with when he was sick. How it must feel to now know the terror and horrible actions you inflicted on others. I can't imagine how hard that would be to live with. Possibly harder for him to deal with as it is for his victims.

It's not looking good for Nick in this chapter. I really can't wait to see his fate is gonna be.

I'm glad that Kevin went to see him. I figured one of them would eventually go see him...I just figured it'd be Howie..lol Hopefully it will bring him some closure...in knowing that Tim is truly sorry for what he did and is now doing much better. I don't expect any of them to forgive him..what he did is pretty much unforgivable, sick or not, specially if it cost one of them their lives. I do hope we get to see the other's and how they are coping in the final chapter. I really can't wait to read it!! It's been such a sensational story..one of THE best villains written I believe. You managed to get your readers to care as much about Tim as they do about the Boys.

GREAT JOB!!! Gonna be so sad when its over :( Hope you got something new up your sleeve!!

Author's Response: Thanks, Jennay! All that you said above about Tim and how horrible it must be for him is probably correct. I couldn't even imagine what that would feel like especially being in an environment where that's really all there is to do, think about how horrible you've been to people. I said Kevin was his last visitor because he was. After Kevin, no one ever visited him again besides the usual people who are hired to. But I did also leave that door open for you to decide if maybe he does take his own life or not. Your last sentence concerning caring about Tim made me smile because that's exactly what I wanted people to feel! YAY!! And thanks for the compliments about being one of the best villains ever! Tim would be pleased!! Of course he would also want a trophy! LOL And this is totally unrelated but I also wanted to thank you for your comments about Judy and The Beast! I remember reading your conversation about it with Julie via twitter and smiling. Of course I wanted to jump in and say YAY that's me!! But I didn't! lmao I have nothing in the works, but maybe some day another crazy idea like this one will pop in my head!

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/13 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 39

I'm going to assume that this last letter is for Nick. I'm really "on the edge of my seat" to find out his fate. As for this chapter, I'm glad you gave Tim a bit of a resolution and that he is getting better. Like I said before, he is one of the most well-written villains I've ever read, and I think a part of that is that you made the reader feel sympathy for him. I like that Kevin was the one who came to see him. It seemed appropriate somehow. The most heartbreaking part of this chapter for me, though, was Kevin's limp. For me, the biggest question that is left to answer is not just the fate of Nick, but of the group as a whole after this big ordeal. What are they doing a year later? Excited to find out!

Author's Response: I really felt like this was as much of his story as the guys so it was important for me to make him likable but at the same time not. It's been fun seeing everyone's opinions on him. I'm in the midst of writing the last chapter now. If I can finish it today I might post it tonight or tomorrow and you will then get to see how everyone is doing one year later. Thanks, Emily! :O)

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/13 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 39

I love the fact you skipped a year so we can see how Tim's doing in this chapter (and hopefully see the others are in the next one). It's nice he got treatment and is doing a bit better, though I find it a bit unbelievable he made that much progress, but that is probably the psychologist in me talking, so I wouldn't worry about that. My study just made me very skeptical I guess.

Great writing as always of course. I'm a bit sad Kevin is limping, but at least you didn't take his leg, lol.

Take your time and update when you think is the right moment. I'll be right here waiting for you. *sings*

Author's Response: Aww, I wish I knew you were a psychologist, I would have totally consulted you on this chapter!! I wasn't sure if meds would make an immediate difference or not. I would think that if most of his behavior was because of an untreated mental condition, once he started treatment there would be a fast show of improvement but I also wasn't sure if that was the case. I just went by years of living with crazy people as my guideline lol I never intended Kevin to have a gimpy leg but as I was writing it seemed more dramatic so I went with it. I don't think I could have ever chopped it off, I'll leave the choppage to Julie! lmao And thanks for being patient! The psychologist in you probably also gets why I need the gratification. hehe

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/13 09:08 am Title: Chapter 39

Awww Tim.... I am just so glad you are making progress. That you are taking responsibility for what you did. It still breaks my heart knowing that you might not have turned into this if you weren't kidnapped by your 'father'. Everyone deserves a happy and normal childhood. You will get better and hopefully before your life expires, you'd get to experience a normal, happy life. The letters are great. I'm happy you thought of that.

Mare, does Kevin's line "At least I'm alive" means anything? I hope Nick is alive, though it's kinda okay if he isn't. :)

I will understand if you will post the final chapter when everyone is back from the cruise. I'd wait. *winks*

Author's Response: Aww you should type that up and mail it to him. Ritz! He would love that and you'd probably become his new BFF! LOL Maybe there's more to that line than meets the eye or maybe he's just grateful to be alive. I'm working on the final one now. But thanks for understanding! :O)

Reviewer: KimberlyCan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/13 01:44 am Title: Chapter 39

Another great chapter! It`s good that Tim ended up in a mental institution since he really turned out the way he did bc of all the manipulation and abuse growing up.
Glad Kevin was also able to visit to get some closure.
can`t wait to read the final chapter!

Author's Response: I think he belongs in the mental institution over a jail cell too. Thanks, Kim!

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/13 01:38 am Title: Chapter 39

Nicks totally dead. It's everything I ever wanted. :P seriously though don't worry about the fact that some people won't be able to read your update on the day you post it. We have all come too far to not read the conclusion so I assure you it'll happen the second wifi is restored!

Author's Response: Eh, he may be he may not be lol

Reviewer: luckystarre Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/13 01:18 am Title: Chapter 39

Ahh what happened with Nick? Can't wait to read how this story ends. Thank you!

Author's Response: Aww thank you for reading! :O)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/13 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 39

Aww reading this chapter made me feel sorry for Tim. With the correct treatment he realised what he'd done was wrong. If only he'd had a normal family and treatment when he was young, he would've had a much better life!

I'm glad Kevin went to visit, obviously he's not going to forgive and forget, but at least he was able to understand that Tim wasn't all there when he did the things he did.

But what about Nick? Did he get better? Can't wait to find out!

Author's Response: Yes, I feel bad for Tim as well. If only he had a chance at a better life. Kevin needed closure so I made sure I gave it to him. :O) Thanks, Steph!