Date: 10/11/13 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 36
Still torn between hating Tim and feeling sorry for him. Poor guy :( I wish things could've been different for him.
As he was digging Nick's grave I was sitting here saying "noooo", he can't bury him alive! But hopefully the police will get there before anyone dies.
Hope your internet decides to co-operate and you can post more soon :)
Author's Response: I can't believe I almost buried Nick alive. That's a whole new low for me! LOL I hope my internet behaves as well. Thanks, Steph!
Date: 10/11/13 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 36
Loved this chapter! I really like the whole layout with the going back and forth to the past and present and the times Tim wanted to kill himself and why. It is really sad though, the childhood he had and how he'd wanted to take his own life. Once to save his mother and once backing out to keep her safe from his father.
The way you created his personality is really good and believable. We all know he's nuts, but we (or at least, I ) still feel sorry for the guy. Great job, Mare!
Now let's just hope the cops are in time to save Nick!
Author's Response: Thanks! Sometimes I worry that the back and forth might be too confusing so I'm glad you're enjoying that! And I am also happy to know you feel sorry for him. I wanted him to be a likable villain! :O)
Date: 10/06/13 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 35
Thank god they found Howie on the road and he was able to take the police and FBI to the cabin.
Poor Kev, when it was a suspected gunshot wound to the head I was shaking my head saying "nooooooo" lol. Glad it's not too serious.
But I really hope Kevin shot Tim somewhere where he's going to bleed a lot and die quickly, before he can get to the camping place and kill Nick.
Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: I know, I was kind of happy Kevin wasn't shot in the head too. He ALMOST was but I decided this story had enough drama already lol Thanks, Steph!
Date: 10/06/13 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 35
Whoa! Was that for real? Howie was saved, just like that? When I read he was found, I was waiting for something to happen. Like the police would get lost and by the timd they'd be there, Tim got there first and killed those who found him. Lol
Poor Kevin, it must have been so scary and helpless to watch Nick being dragged away. Glad he seems fine, though.
Good thinking, Howie! I never expected you to think of the camp site.
Can't wait for the next interlude, err, chapter. Till next week, Mare. :)
Author's Response: I wouldn't exactly say just like that. The poor guy has been through hell, I did have to give him a break at some point. LOL
There needs to be at least one chapter before the next interlude otherwise it won't be an interlude but I'm halfway done with writing that interlude now, so maybe it'll be ready by next Saturday! Thanks, Ritz!
Date: 10/06/13 09:16 am Title: Chapter 35
I feel like a jerk but once again I laughed at Howie when he said "don't shoot I'm a backstreet boy" lmao.
Kevin crying is the worst, I felt so bad for him not being able to keep Tim from taking Nick. As for Nick....I feel a bit hopeful he will get rescued. Hopefully they catch psycho before he does anything!!!
Author's Response: LMAO I did too! I'm glad someone else thought that was funny. Kevin is always crying but yes, when he feels hopeless it's the worst. Poor guy! Thanks, Tracy!
Date: 10/06/13 09:08 am Title: Chapter 34
I actually liked how Rochelle and AJ were holding hands as she slept in the chair and Leighanne was in Brian's bed. That was really cute. I somehow think Brian and AJ aren't as safe as they think...or maybe that is the cynic in me hoping for catastrophe LOL.
I actually laughed at Howie cause he has had horrible luck so far...poor Howie. :( Poor Nick not being able to move and Kevin is about to lose it. And here in classic Mare fashion is another cliffie. love this, reading next chapter now!
Author's Response: oops almost missed this one! I could see the wives doing that after their husbands went MIA. And of course there would be another cliffie! lol Thanks, Tracy!
Date: 10/06/13 08:45 am Title: Chapter 35
I'm glad they found both Howie and Kevin! But poor Nick, hasn't he been through enough? Can't wait to see if they will find him on time.
Author's Response: Apparently no, Nick has not been through enough just yet. LOL :OP
Date: 10/06/13 07:20 am Title: Chapter 35
Whew, I got some of my answers! Glad Kevin is okay, I would not have been cool with u killing him. Glad Howie could lead the authorities back, he finally accomplished something;)
Now just have to find out about Tim and Nick, oh the suspense!
Author's Response: I could never Kevin! :O( I may want to kick him from time to time, but I don't think I'd ever be able to kill him. Unless he leaves again then he is SO toast!! Yay to Howie doing something right for once! Thanks, Kim!! :O)
Date: 10/06/13 01:11 am Title: Chapter 35
The suspense is killing me! I hope Kevin's going to be ok! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, Kyrie! :O)
Date: 10/05/13 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 35
LOL as soon as I posted a review to the last chapter, I refreshed the page and saw that you had posted another! Poor Kevin, so upset at losing Nick. : ( When I read "gunshot wound to the head" I was like: WHAT? But super glad that was not the case. Great chapter though! I knew it was going to be Nick and Tim at the end. Poor kid, he's just getting dragged (no pun intended) through the wringer! Weirdly enough, I can't wait for the reunion at the hospital. : )
Author's Response: Weird, right? LOL I know poor Nick with or without the pun :O(
Date: 10/05/13 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 34
I love a little bit of everyone, except of course the mean cliffy! If Kevin's been shot, I don't know what those two are going to do. These guys and their big dumb hearts, that they can't just kill Tim to protect themselves! I can't believe Howie's already run out of gas, and I really liked the Hospital scenes. I definitely haven't given up on Nick, he's a fighter, but if you kill any of them off I will not be a happy reader!! lol ...But seriously...don't.
Author's Response: Whoa! This is the second time this has happened. I just posted the next chapter when you left a review for this one! LOL Cue Twilight Zone music! I know, if Howie had only made sure Tim was dead, the rest of this could have been avoided! I'm glad to hear SOMEONE hasn't given up on Nick. Everyone has him dead and buried! :O( lol Thanks, Sam!
Date: 10/05/13 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 34
I really enjoyed hearing from them all this time, poor Howie, just his luck to get away in a car that is running out of petrol :(
And the part with Kevin and Nick was so heartbreaking, I hope it was Tim who got shot and not Kevin or Nick.
I also hope Tim doesn't try and sneak into the hospital, unless he's going there in a body bag :)
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks, Steph! and thanks for being my 300th review! It was bugging me seeing 299 lol I was hoping someone would come along and turn it over to a nice even number! :O)
Date: 10/05/13 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 34
U and your cliffhangers! Well I'm glad we will be getting an interlude tomorrow but I need to know what is happening with Kevin and Nick.
U really played up the emotions in this chapter. I could feel Howie's despair when he ran out of gas, Brian's fear of something happening again, Kevin's worrying about last moments with his family and the comfort Nick felt even though he could answer Kevin.
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks, Kim! Maybe you will get your answers in the interlude! ;O)
Date: 10/05/13 10:31 am Title: Chapter 34
It's hard to choose between Kevin and Tim who's going to die. But since the next chapter is an interlude one, this nightmare isn't over which means Tim couldn't be dead now. I just hope Kevin was hit on his broken ankle... oooops. lol
Poor Howard. I just hope that the chopper will find him before Tim does.
Is it too early to analyze who is lost, broken, prisoner and trapped? :) I can't wait for the interlude tomorrow. :)
Author's Response: That may be true but just because Tim 'may' be dead doesn't mean the nightmare would be over. ;O) just something to ponder. And ACK! I can't believe you asked me that!! lol
Date: 10/05/13 07:59 am Title: Chapter 34
Is it bad that I end up laughing when Howie ran out of gas? lol
Is it bad that I'm hoping that Brian is wrong when he said "nothing is going get us"?
Is it bad that I don't want you to kill Tim? ç_ç
Author's Response: #1 - no because I did too! LOL poor Howie! #2 - Yes but it's you we're talking about here so I'll also say no, because you never know... #3 - Nope, I don't want to kill him either, but then again it won't be me if he does have to die! :O( I see you've updated, Cinzia. I'm going to read it this weekend. I tried last night but I had a migraine and just couldn't focus on reading or writing. So at one point this weekend I'll read. Just wanted you to know! :O)
