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Reviewer: DampFoxes Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/15 03:43 am Title: Epilogue

Dayum! That was of the best flics I've ever read- and that's a lot lmao.
Really well done, really well written, really interesting concept, and a plot that had me squealing in my geography class just last period haha

The idea of two lovers trapped in another world whilst being in comas in the real world is very 'Wristcutters: A Love Story'- and that's one of my favourite films. It would be interesting to know if it inspired the story in any way.

But anyhow... This is a story I will definitely be reading again.

Reviewer: emeraldbecca1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/13 03:10 am Title: Epilogue

AW I LOVE IT!

Reviewer: ktbspa2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/13 08:18 pm Title: Epilogue

awesome story!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/13 04:41 pm Title: Epilogue

I am very glad they ended up together! Loved this story one of my favorites for sure :)

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/13 04:31 pm Title: Epilogue

awe! Nice ending to the story. Glad Margo and Nick are together! :D

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/13 11:59 am Title: Epilogue

Yay happy ending!Loved it!
Are you going to continue writing 'The Unstable Art of Moving On' now? pleaseeeee? ;) :D

Author's Response: Working on an update now. There's some HUGE twists coming very soon in USAoMO though... ;)

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/13 11:27 am Title: Epilogue

Aw... have I told you how much I love happy endings?

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/13 07:01 am Title: Epilogue

And maybe just a little bit more lovin between Margo an nick. But I loved this!

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/13 07:00 am Title: Epilogue

Aw I wanted to hear about what happened to Margo that she ended up paused!

Reviewer: KimberlyCan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/13 06:56 am Title: Epilogue

Great story as always! Can't wait to read more of your work in the future!

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/13 06:22 am Title: Epilogue

This was a great ending!I loved it!Good Job! :)

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/13 10:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

oh wow! I hope Nick lives!!

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/13 01:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Well, you know how to get me on the edge of my seat! I'm happy to see Nick got 'unpaused'!

Reviewer: MariskaMP Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/13 01:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Please dont Let it be the surge

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/13 09:54 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Ooh! This WOULD be a good ending! (Please don't end it here!)