Date: 09/16/13 10:10 pm Title: Part 1 - Chapter 1
I totally understand. When I write, I write for myself, for my joy, to express my feelings. I'm always worried when I post too, so I very much understand. Once again, I loved it and am looking forward to more.
Date: 09/16/13 10:10 pm Title: Part 1 - Chapter 1
I totally understand. When I write, I write for myself, for my joy, to express my feelings. I'm always worried when I post too, so I very much understand. Once again, I loved it and am looking forward to more.
Date: 09/16/13 04:00 pm Title: Part 1 - Chapter 1
No, went I meant was just that there was so much going, not in a bad way, but a good way. A way to draw you in and keep you in :)
Author's Response: Ok, thanks! Sometimes you get so caught up in writing it that you see the connections and things don't seem confusing, but to a reader they might. Thanks for the feedback, I've never let anyone but friends read my stories before and was hesitant about posting them online, not sure of the reaction I'd get. Of course my friends are all biased and tell me the stories are great! ;-) Nice to hear from others that they like them!
Date: 09/15/13 11:46 pm Title: Part 3 - Chapter 7
Aww. It was a great story! Great research and such detail. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks again for reading. I love doing the research for new stories, I learn so much!
Date: 09/15/13 04:50 pm Title: Part 3 - Chapter 1
Aww. Im enjoying this. Even with all the twists.
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying the story. Thank you for reading!
Date: 09/15/13 03:45 pm Title: Part 2 - Chapter 4
Aww...through bad times, comes good. But so much confusion.!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Did you mean the story is confusing or the characters are confused? I know the plot line gets involved, maybe too much?
Date: 09/15/13 08:19 am Title: Part 2 - Chapter 4
Aww...through bad times, comes good. But so much confusion.!
Date: 09/15/13 08:19 am Title: Part 2 - Chapter 4
Aww...through bad times, comes good. But so much confusion.!
Date: 09/15/13 06:51 am Title: Part 1 - Chapter 1
A very unique point to take on a story. But well written.
