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Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/14 10:47 am Title: Familiar Faces?

Interesting!

Author's Response: Thanks PaulaKTBPA!

Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/14 02:03 pm Title: Familiar Faces?

"The diner is on fire" - Loved it!

So the girl from the bus depot now works at the diner? Hmmmmmm

Author's Response: Thanks KeepThisSecret, she just pops up everywhere!

Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/14 01:44 pm Title: In A World Like This

Good start!

There is definitely something off with that girl. Perhaps she's afraid of running in to someone or of being recognized? However, If AJ were to come up to me and ask me for a chair in a bus terminal, I would also probably just nod at him in shock. LOL

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/14 06:06 am Title: Familiar Faces?

Hmmm, I wonder why she seems so panicked..

Author's Response: Maybe it's because AJ is just such a ladies' man! LOL Thanks Nijntje!

Reviewer: JordansLady Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/14 05:25 am Title: Familiar Faces?

man you really got me wondering what going on with this girl lol...cant wait for what happens next.

Author's Response: And I'm going to keep you wondering for a little while! Thanks JordansLady!

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/14 03:05 am Title: Familiar Faces?

Love it! Can't wait to read more and find out her story.

Author's Response: I promise you will, just not too soon! LOL Thanks Sapphire!

Reviewer: Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/14 01:29 am Title: Familiar Faces?

AJ has always been such a ladies man lol...I cant wait to get to know this new girl at the diner...AJ seems to have a crush :p

Author's Response: He really is! It's going to be interesting with this new girl! Thanks Carter and I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: JordansLady Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/14 02:26 am Title: In A World Like This

hope shes ok..great start

Author's Response: Thanks JordansLady, I hope you enjoy this one!

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/14 09:43 pm Title: In A World Like This

I'm not really an A.J.-girl, but I've decided to give this story a go.
Interesting start!

Author's Response: Thanks Nijntje, I appreciate you giving it a chance and I hope I can get you into it!

Reviewer: Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/14 07:18 am Title: In A World Like This

I like the start so far!!! Cannot wait to read more!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks Carter, I hope you keep enjoying it!

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/14 01:47 am Title: In A World Like This

OOH intertesting start!!! Can't wait to find out what her story is.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try not to disappoint! Thank you again for everything!