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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/15 12:52 am Title: If...

I'm glad I waited to leave a proper review until this was finished. I always love your description because I can picture it as if it's a movie playing in front of me. I loved seeing them together even for a dream, I missed them. It's kind of nice to see a glimpse of what would have happened if he had lived through the cancer, but it was also interesting that they both were married to someone else. I think Cary just wanted to kind of remind herself she had moved on. Great story.

Author's Response: Thanks, Tracy! It was fun writing about these characters again and interesting to think about how things would have turned out if he had lived. I was originally going to just make it a 100% fluffy little fantasy dream of Cary's, but then I thought that was kind of unfair to her future husband if she's still fantasizing about Nick. In all honesty, I'm not sure Nick and Cary's relationship would have lasted longterm. I think what Nick said happened is probably what would have happened to them eventually; he would have broken her heart either way. So I think the dream was a way to show her that things worked out the way they were meant to be, and she's with the right man now. I'm glad that came through in the story and that you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for the feedback! :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/15 08:05 am Title: If...

Oh was I ever happy when I saw this. I can't imagine how this could happen but I will be reading along to find out.

THank you for coming up with this.

Author's Response: Thanks, Marguerite! It's great to hear from you! I'm gonna try to work on the rest now; hopefully I'll be able to post it in the next few days.