Date: 01/08/16 07:52 am Title: ----------------------------------------
Holy shit dude.
First thing I thought of was that one sound check when Kevin was being a douche in London or something on tour. When they were fighting like some married couple. Was that your inspiration for this? Cause I can totally see them going at it after a fight like that LOL.
This was really long and very descriptive. Which is nice because you can picture it in your mind if you have a good imagination. I also liked how Kevin let Nick be in control because that's something I feel he would let him do. Just to make Nick happy. I also thought the scene at the end with the other boys was hilarious as well, with Brian internally questioning the tube of lube lmao. Great job hun. I don't normally read graphic stuff but I could skim over some of it and still get the essence of what you were trying to convey. I loved it.
