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Reviewer: mersey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/04 05:30 pm Title: Dangerous Times (Kevin)

you know what sucks now? waiting for another update from you, urgh...okay okay, ive been patient, i can do this! that aside, this chapter is brilliant! ive been waiting for the chapter that can at least tell me what the heck happened in there, so this one is refreshing, of course i forgot who hanna was and had to refer to the previous chapters, but im at the right path, everything's cool, lol. so for the next 2 mths at least, im not bugging you with this story, and that's enough time to write a new chappie buddy!

Author's Response: Already working on the next chapter(s). The kids being out of school is kinda slowing me down though cuz i have even less time than usual...yeee. But hopefully won't be even half as long as the last chapter took.

Reviewer: Reemo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/04 12:34 pm Title: Radio Song (AJ)

how do we get you to update more?????? please dont make us wait I swear waitting is a turture

Author's Response: hmmm. to get me to update more, call my neighbor Amanda and ask her to babysit more often! (just kidding...sorta lol). I'll do my best to update faster, but my writing time is severely impaired by my kids (and my neurotic tendancies. lol)

Reviewer: Mare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/04 12:19 pm Title: Dangerous Times (Kevin)

Hi Chaos! First of all congrats on finishing your chapter it was nice and suspenseful. It flowed really well and for the first time in this story you start to see what actually happened kind of lol my only thing is because of the long gaps between chapters I had a hard time remembering who the other characters were. Like Hannah. Great job! I'm glad you didn't end it with a cliffie lol

Author's Response: Heh if I hadn't finally just decided to chop the chapter in half (I'm not kidding...) and end it where I did, it would have had a cliffhanger ending. But I just couldn't get the chapter finished and I was already up to page 25 (of the chapter)...so I started looking back for a point where it would work to end the chapter. So it ends rather abruptly (lol) but....that kinda worked for what I wanted Kev's "First assessment" to be... (And yeah, I'll try not to take so long...I hadn't really had Hannah involved much in the story yet, so it makes sense it was hard to remember who she was...ah well...*sighs* lol)

Reviewer: AjsSweety Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/04 03:34 am Title: Dangerous Times (Kevin)

I like this story, don't worry about long delays I've done the same thing. Keep up the good work on the stories and the site.

Author's Response: Thanks! I hate having the long delays, so thanks for understanding!

Reviewer: kisstheraingirl12489 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/04 07:29 pm Title: Dangerous Times (Kevin)

This is realy powerful man.This is good.I'm kinda speechless.Forgot you wrote so good.Especially after I red Ground Zero.That story was so good it's hard to describe.

Author's Response: Aw thenks! *gets all blushy*

Reviewer: Astarael Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/04 05:53 pm Title: So Fast, So Numb (Brian)

Another GREAT story! I love your writing! Please write more.

Reviewer: meighan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/04 05:56 am Title: So Fast, So Numb (Brian)

Thank you, thank you so much for updating! I have been waiting so long and I'm thrilled you've gotten back to it. I love this story!

Reviewer: bsbajfanmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/04 09:06 am Title: So Fast, So Numb (Brian)

another awesome, gripping story! You must finish it!!!

Reviewer: britishbabe102 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/04 03:17 am Title: So Fast, So Numb (Brian)

YAY!!! I love this story and am very glad its back!!! Nice twist with the twins calling Nick Daddy

Reviewer: Kyla Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/04 04:40 am Title: So Fast, So Numb (Brian)

whoa that chapter surprised and shocked me lol the part about Leighanne dying especially. But it wasnt a totally bad thing...liked the fact that it was unexpected. now if u had killed off Nick then i would be upset...jk! great story! hope to read more soon!

Reviewer: Veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/04 04:03 am Title: So Fast, So Numb (Brian)

Ahh, see this is why when people ask me what writers inspire me, I ALWAYS list you amongst the few. Wonderful chapter, you were missed!

Reviewer: mersey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/04 05:18 pm Title: So Fast, So Numb (Brian)

hey you neurotic self! This chappy is excellent, you know that already =) and meanie you got me all teary eyed, i noe it's end of the world and all that stuff, but make it better? lol...

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/04 06:42 am Title: Radio Song (AJ)

That was really good and so powerful. There was so much emotion put in to it. Wow....great job and I can't wait to read on to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/04 12:45 am Title: So Fast, So Numb (Brian)

Oh My God that chapter was sooo grand! I have been waiting for so long for that chapter I loved it! This story is just so interesting! Hope we get an update soon! P.S. What happened to nobody else can walk it for you? I have be dying little deaths each day that story hasn't been updated. I just love your writing that much!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/04 04:54 am Title: So Fast, So Numb (Brian)

Hey i love reading this story...i hope that we get a quicker update next time...lol