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Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/04 12:08 pm Title: Oh So Close

Sounds like Oriana is actually softening to Howie....if only she could see how genuine he really is. THe chapter was so cute....and very funny. I really enjoyed it. Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: AngelgirlDorough Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/04 03:22 am Title: Oh So Close

Hey is about time that Oriana open to him a bit , Howie is really trying his hardest to get to her but darn those boys that walking in in the most exciting and intresting part when he was finally geeting a kiss from her. I just Howie let go on the pool and play with her she wants to pay with him. It is his time he better not waste it and don't make her feel bad. hmmm what I just read that Howie might stay the night with her to hang out that I'll be intresting to read. Darn that Nick doesn't know who to used is words wisely and now its going to cost him hehe good for tega though. But now I understand a bit more why Ori has the attitude that she have. Good keep it coming I'm addictive lol!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/04 04:07 am Title: Oh So Close

LMAO!!!! SO funny! And GO HOWIE!!!! He FINALLY is getting SOMEwhere with her!!! Yee-hah!!! UPDATE A.S.A.P.!!!!! ~Lenni~

Reviewer: sweetangelicangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/04 03:01 am Title: Oh So Close

Ooh, so Oriana decided to warm up to Homeboy a bit. That's a good thing, I'd have to say. Just wait until she recieves the gifts he bought her. I'm just anxious to see what's going to go down when Brian arrives. That should be interesting. Keep up the good work and update soon! [Alex]