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Reviewer: scarlett Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/05 11:24 pm Title: A Speeding Relationship

i'm truly enjoying this one. I hate Ace and his attitude. At the end of the chapter, i was all-out smiling thinking about those shirts. LOL. even i wouldn't want my name on a pink shirt!

Author's Response: I don't think anyone wants a pink shirt with their name!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/05 05:39 pm Title: A Speeding Relationship

such a cute chapter. Although the football jocks are cruel assholes. No wonder I never took the time to get to know any of them at my own high school. lol. Ace needs to lay off of Ori about dating Mac. He is no good!Anyways, I hope that Howie doesnt mess stuff up with Oriana, or her with him. They need to become an official couple!!! lol Dee and Elle seem like a riot too! great job! Please update soon!

Author's Response: We think the stereotype for football jocks are usually true... But, if one would like to counter our idea, please email biteme@hairmonkeyballs.com

Reviewer: Maggie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/05 01:51 am Title: A Speeding Relationship

LOL! ARe they really going to give him that hideous neon PINK shirt? Howie's gonna ask for a purple one, too, isn't he? Favorite color after all. WHEN is Brian going to stop acting like a jerk? Will he ever stop hating Oriana? Oh, and does he go out for the Tartan football team? Heh, with Oriana, I kinda doubt it. We'll see, though, right?

Author's Response: Wow, many questions that will be answered in upcoming chapters. Doesn't take off the edge though, does it?

Reviewer: AngelgirlDorough Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/05 07:47 pm Title: A Speeding Relationship

Hey great job gurlas that is defenetly awsome I love it. But I belive that Ace can be a problem if he get to team up with Brian oh no hell will break loose. Can I have more?

Author's Response: Of course you can have more!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/05 06:12 am Title: A Speeding Relationship

LMAO! Well, I'm finally caught up-lol. SO good! I laughed throughout both chapters & Brian can be such an ass sometimes - a hot ass! Lol. GO HOWIE!!! UPDATE!!!! ~Lenni~

Author's Response: A hot ass? Does that mean he has fiery farts, too? Haha! Thanks for the review!